Blue Ice Sculptress

Blue Ice Sculptress

A Poem by 1VJ

Blue ice runs through her veins
she's the defiant sculptress,
like a September gale warning
caught off-guard sans defenses
capsizing midst agitated waves
she'll relentlessly whirl senses, 
weighting your ultimate depths
'til choking below dithered seas
neath upheavals shadowy madness
sucking you into her sordid
 abyss, 
as her siren song plays infinitely 

© 2015 1VJ


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Bravo! It is plain to see that you are intelligent and articulate with a well-groomed writing style (not a compliment just an observation). I like the idea of the siren rising up from the icy depths, blue veins standing out as she sculpts sailors minds. I haven't read much of your work yet but I hope you will consider doing other mythical creatures. I give it 5 out of 5 Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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B
I love this write
She sounds like a handful there lol

I can feel everything when i read this
The madness of it all

somehow i see so much life in your words
I wonder who is this person ???


Posted 8 Years Ago


1VJ

8 Years Ago

A figment of my imagination, or not! :) Thanks so much.
B

8 Years Ago

lol
A cool imagination
I love your writing, you paint quite a picture I can vividly see as I'm reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1VJ

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words.
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The imagery is definitely stirring within the mid of the reader. Great title! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1VJ

8 Years Ago

Thank you, much appreciated! :)
Foreboding character study. Great imagery and simile. Your poetry is unique and always interesting. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


1VJ

8 Years Ago

Thanks Lydi, I'm enthralled by your review.
lured by the siren song and drowned in the abyss of her shadowy madness...an intense image...this brought to mind the sinking of the Titanic...love the accompanying photo, too...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

i live near the ocean and get to see many icebergs drifting along between May and July...you are wel.. read more
1VJ

8 Years Ago

Lucky you, all I can hear and see is traffic. :)
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8 Years Ago

Oh, sorry to hear that, but I am happy to live away from it all :D

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1VJ
1VJ

Trivandrum, NY, India



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