Aligning Diamonds

Aligning Diamonds

A Poem by 1VJ
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adorned cosmoses

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She gingerly aligned glinting diamonds
thereupon unlocking adorned cosmoses'
vested secrets from time periods agone
and prevailing mesmerized mysteries
flickering 'tween concerted galaxies,
awaiting farthermost never-ending stardust  
of kindred spirits' infinitely enlivened,
collective at last amongst boundless sempiternity

© 2016 1VJ


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This is beautiful. The picture of "all that is", that you portrayed sets mind and heart at peace.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1VJ

7 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Queen.
Beautiful imagery,your words displayed the heavens above so well

Posted 7 Years Ago


1VJ

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Andrew.
I have always been mesmerized by the brilliance of the sky - the stars, the planets, how they all align for us to gaze upon and fall in love with. Your words are such a gorgeous orchestration of beauty and wonder, and the photo - simply gorgeous!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1VJ

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my stargazing, thanks so much Kelly!
Kelly Scheppers

7 Years Ago

I'd really love to use this graphic - may I?
1VJ

7 Years Ago

Sure, I don't recall where I found it, so I can't give credit but have at it!
This is pure magic, rich with vivid imagery. You managed to summarise the beautiful mysteries of the skies in such a few lines that flowed together ever so smoothly.

You have an interesting voice. I will definitely be dropping by again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1VJ

7 Years Ago

Thanks for this glowing review Alice, I'll be by your page again soon too.
Mesmerizing words and imagery. Beauty upon beauty...:)................

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1VJ

7 Years Ago

Wow, mesmerizing, thanks Sami! :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...:))))).......
Remarkable choice of words! You made the starry heavens come alive through your beautiful manifestations. This indeed is a beautiful thought-provoking piece. Keep it up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1VJ

7 Years Ago

Thanks Daisy, much appreciated! :)
Beautiful artwork and amazing use of description. The words danced gently create thoughts and visions. Thank you Paloma for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1VJ

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your attentive review Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
"sempiternity" what a great word to describe the galaxy. Yes, star gazing on a clear night is a magical pastime. A beautiful celestial write, Paloma. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1VJ

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Lydi.

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Added on September 11, 2016
Last Updated on September 18, 2016

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1VJ
1VJ

Trivandrum, NY, India



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Another speck of carbon, this one. Sentient and sagacious, yet affable. Advocate of Fantasy and Gaming, this one. Artistic and pugnacious, yet subtle. more..

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