Ghost

I stood there, enveloped by hands.

Ignoring all and every comment,

that rose from the dark.

I was a mystery to them,

one they couldn't decipher.

Why throw away a perfect life,

when there wasn't one to start with?

You see the world behind my eyes,

and watch life slowly fading.

You take my hands and feel nothing.

Like I was a feather, so light and fragile.

So look into my bare face,

what do you see? 

Complete and utter emptiness.

Reviews

[Esa Ray]

Woah, so deep and creative! I love how the mystery crawls in your poetry. Great masterpiece! Keep it coming. :)

[PandaPeaceful]

Thank you! I appreciate your comment.

[Esa Ray]

I just placed it in my library. It's just so creative. I love it! I think you ought to know. :)

[PandaPeaceful]

Well, I feel completely honored! Thank you. Expect my review in your story.

[Write Cat]

Wow!! Very in depth, I am definitively going to chew on this for a while!!!

[PandaPeaceful]

Hahaha. Thanks!
Have a lovely day.