Ambiguous Souls

It's like a clock ticking,

your ability to vanish.

Your mind sets me apart,

faster than any knife could.

It's like your fingers,

have painted a map.

You know where my 

heart lays and yet,

you make no move 

towards it.

Why? 

Haven't I shown you enough?

Tight dresses and perfect words,

your eyes remain fixed elsewhere.

Amourous gestures, biting lips,

You reject me purposefully.

My heart is greying, and you 

are the cause of my illness.

You are tearing me apart-

Every move, every deceptive

word, and my world brightens.

I tell myself to stop and yet,

I can't.

They asked me why I had fallen.

Why I had simply given up.

I never respond, for a simple tear

tells its origin.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoyed!

Reviews

[lightsong]

unrequited love, depending love, I think of those, and I think about, that sometimes we fell in love with someone seeing what they can't seem to see about themselves, I've read to pieces of You, and what I like about Your style that You don't come to blame the whole world, but more to write the realistic situation.

[PandaPeaceful]

I thank you for your lovely review Light!

[girlandpen]

Same as the previous review... your whole poem is excellent; however, those few lines really spoke to me. It might've been the content, but there's also just something about your writing and description there that makes it feel so raw and real

[PandaPeaceful]

Thanks Rachel! You don't understand how happy that makes me feel.

[Ardra]

My heart is greying, and you
are the cause of my illness.
You are tearing me apart-
Every move, every deceptive
word, and my world brightens.
I tell myself to stop and yet,
I can't.

mmmm i just love these lines... been there felt that :)

[PandaPeaceful]

Crazy how we can all relate to each other. Thank you!