Feelings

Feelings

A Poem by SwagMaster
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Sometimes I feel happy, sometimes I feel sad.

Sometimes I feel like yelling, because I'm feeling mad.

Sometimes I feel silly, sometimes I feel love-struck.

Sometimes I'm feeling frustrated because I'm feeling stuck.

Sometimes I feel scared, or nervous as can be.

Sometimes I feel alone, and then I feel lonely.

Sometimes I feel hurt, confused, or maybe mean.

Or maybe feeling joyful, or dirty or obscene.

Our feelings are important, for whether you laugh, cry, or shout,

Your feelings are simply YOU; they're what you're all about.

© 2012 SwagMaster


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SwagMaster
I just scribbled this down during English, on my assignment on similes/metaphors.

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I love this! The quick witted style of writing you used to explain the excellent point of feelings came out beautifully and cleanly. In a nutshell, you proved a true, intelligent, and rightful point about emotions and ourselves in such short rhymed word choices! Love it!

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So nice and sweet! Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So trueeee. And everyone can totally relate. Loved this, especially the rhymes! :> Great write ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! The quick witted style of writing you used to explain the excellent point of feelings came out beautifully and cleanly. In a nutshell, you proved a true, intelligent, and rightful point about emotions and ourselves in such short rhymed word choices! Love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I definitely agree with what this poem is saying. Your feelings really can show who you are. For instance, if a person is usually happy, you can determine that they're a happy person.

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