Expectation

Expectation

A Poem by Chrys_Pap
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Spring is the season of rebirth! May hope find its place on everyone's heart...

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I wait for you

like the dark waits for the light in dawn

and the mountains for the snow in winter.

And inside my heart

lies a barren land seeking for water.

Bees return again to the lilac trees

and fly in circles above my dream

while Hope finds the way to my yard

attached on a sparrow’s tail.

And as I’m expecting you to come

a caterpillar inside me waits its turn to become a butterfly…

© 2013 Chrys_Pap


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A wonderful touching piece that's well linked up with the life.. with the sky.. with the air and of course to the heart. A beautiful piece that makes a reader refresh.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chrys_Pap

10 Years Ago

I'm really glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing :)
Love your conncetion to nature that flows and grows within and the imagery is beautiful. Splendid read and write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chrys_Pap

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it.
Brandon S. Whitten

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Wonderful piece with a final line that seems very original to me. "in dawn" instead of "by/of dawn" (for example) is very interesting. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chrys_Pap

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing!
It's a great "EXPECTION", i love this write,
I wait for you
like the dark waits for the light in dawn
and the mountains for the snow in winter.

great lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chrys_Pap

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
I enjoyed your lovely words... especially the butterfly ending...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chrys_Pap

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading and reviewing :)
wonderful write, you touched my heart. That;'s a real imagination, you starting was so good n ending was damn nice as well.
how did you get the idea to write if may i ask ?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chrys_Pap

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :) It is a poem i first wrote in my mother tongue and then i translated it in E.. read more
Not bad, and your use of imagery, especially at the very end, is fairly well-done. I wish you'd expanded this a little bit more, as it seems to me the ending is just a tad expected and passive, but either way, this is a good start.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chrys_Pap

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing! :) The end is indeed passive because i wanted to show the passivity that li.. read more

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Added on March 16, 2013
Last Updated on September 23, 2013
Tags: hope, sparrow, butterfly, caterpillar, dawn, lilac

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Chrys_Pap
Chrys_Pap

Greece



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My name is Chrysovalanto and i come from Greece. I have studied English and American Literature and linguistics! I love writing, traveling and taking photographs! :) more..

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