The Bond Is Too Dear

Bond between me and my cousin..Instant writing in a bus ;)

The bond we share is too dear
Spending time together is no fear
Lots of talks, lots of movies
Shes a gossip girl ..I am just a rookie
Sleepover with her is so much fun
We cant stop talking cause we are too young
The thing we have noticed the most
when we meet something strange do happen at any cost
Either its falling from a scooter or her fear of dogs is way too cuter
Everything that happen is so rare
We are so clumsy, We don't care
Sometimes its so funny to remember all that
She is a cousin we should have a good laugh
The bond we share is too dear
Spending time together is no fear !

Reviews

[Joseph Tafoya]

i love it and i do not know i am sure it is from your perspective right?but there is some things i see that needs fixing but all in all it a great piece of work you got here and i enjoy your talent maybe you can teach me a few things haha but really i enjoy your work keep it up.

[Parul Sharma]

Yes exactly ..my perspective...I am new here and started writing just now ..well thank you so much :) Glad you liked it haha you r talented as well

[Joseph Tafoya]

Haha no problem I like helping out new and old writers on here I also new here my self and haven't put nothing up latley but you did a pretty good job keep it up and thx

[Parul Sharma]

haha thank you :)

[Eliot Knight]

To the point and without any real depth, it's all right for an instant writing as you have said. There are a few grammatical errors you might want to recheck. As for the heart behind the poem, reminds me of my time with my family and the bond between blood.

[dexterous sam]

being another tyro .....this is excellent ....applaud ..

[Parul Sharma]

Thanks a ton! glad you enjoyed my poem

[dexterous sam]

you are welcome

[Saddam]

The bond we share is too dear
Spending time together is no fear !

Very nice one dear friend.
I love the image which you creates in our mind and that's true.

[Parul Sharma]

I am glad you liked it ..Thank you so much :)

[GreenShoes]

I have two girl cousins that are a year and a half younger than me, and we were very close growing up, so I understand this poem perfectly. :)

[Parul Sharma]

Shes one year older than.me..So we are close enough ..Thank you for kind words :)

[Elodie Thompson]

What a fun way to describe the bond you share with your cousin. I felt very delighted to read it because it was written in a very simple yet descriptive manner and contained a very positive vibe that would make anyone feel glad upon reading it. Well done.

[sinNsincerity]

It's great for me to picture you on the bus and this is what you were thinking. I do the majority of my writing on bus rides and I enjoyed reading this Parul.

[Parul Sharma]

I myself enjoy writing on bus rides..Its Fun ;) Glad you enjoyed it

[StimulateyourCreativity]

I enjoyed this, great job!

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you :)

[Lyingwithlions]

Beautiful poem. Nothing is more dear than the bonds we have with family and friend. :)

[Parul Sharma]

Thanks alot..Yes offcourse.. :-)

[Arjun Singh]

This 1's gd fr an instant write...
Wd lv to read 1 dt u hv pondered long nd hard over....
Keep writing.... :)

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you for the review..Yeah sure ..I will :)

[Writergirl]

Ahh...to be young again- such innocent times :) great job

[Parul Sharma]

Indeed..Thank you so much :)