Closer To The End

Closer To The End

A Poem by Passingdaze

First one I've thrown on here in a long time. Hope everyone likes it.

Silence is my shield,
My shield from a world that has left me a fragile mess.

Violence is my shelter,
My shelter from a heart that has given less.

Left to rot amongst these flowers,
Born to fall just like this rain,
Left to burn with these days,
Born to feel only pain.

© 2012 Passingdaze

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Suffocating and I relate...
Potent piece that renders the reader as shattered as the imagery :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw this is an emotional poem and bittersweet. I like the end, born to feel pain. Great job and keep writing. :) 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on July 25, 2012
Last Updated on July 25, 2012



Blacksburg, VA

I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..