Tadpoles

It's sinking in,

The thoughts,the silence.

You are an echo,

Meant to bruise and control,

Destined to bring my demise.

 

My heart is a crack in this wall,

Everlasting pain,

A voice in the distance,

An eternal stare.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Oh yes! ♥

"You are an echo,
Meant to bruise and control,
Destined to bring my demise."

Love it!!!

[astronaut]

I like the "My heart is cracking in this wall" part. You have unique writing. Wonderful job, you're a great poet. :)

[zombiikillah666]

this is sad. much like my life.
): *cries*
oh, but i like this. (:

[S.S.P.]

Damn G. That's tight!