Tadpoles

Tadpoles

A Poem by Passingdaze

It's sinking in,

The thoughts,the silence.

You are an echo,

Meant to bruise and control,

Destined to bring my demise.

 

My heart is a crack in this wall,

Everlasting pain,

A voice in the distance,

An eternal stare.

© 2010 Passingdaze


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Oh yes! ♥

"You are an echo,
Meant to bruise and control,
Destined to bring my demise."

Love it!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the "My heart is cracking in this wall" part. You have unique writing. Wonderful job, you're a great poet. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is sad. much like my life.
): *cries*
oh, but i like this. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn G. That's tight!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Passingdaze
Passingdaze

Blacksburg, VA



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I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..

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