Unburdening

Unburdening

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Don't let it fester.

"

Tell it to the sky,

scream your heart out at the moon,

let your anger out!


17/08/19

© 2019 John Alexander McFadyen


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Ever wonder where the anger comes from?!
T

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Great question Tom!
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Rye
I do this a lot at times, I think it helps at times.

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Indeed it does and no harm to anyone else. Thank you Rye.
i guess we all do at times,keeps us from blowing up

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Indeed we do Ron and no harm done. Many thanks.
 wordman

4 Years Ago

well it`s good to let off some steam from time to time
Insightful. We should never let our feelings of either love or hate burden our heart and soul.

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Indeed so FKK. Many thanks.
Wisdom here John. Always better to release that anger than let it fester. Good imagery here, the man in the moon had raised eye brows and his hands over his ears. Nicely conveyed.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

I just find an empty field and scream. No farmers to my knowledge have been damaged by what they hea.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Poor cows!
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Yes, there's a thought :))
I could hear a voice crying loud and clear, encouraging moving ahead, crying aloud to make my voice be heard, writing as much as I can to express my emotion, never giving up, always pressing on and never feel weary until I make happens.

This is great, John.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Expressed emotions in the right place at the right time can heal, at least for a while. Many Thanks .. read more
you know, John? I think the moon can absorb it just fine...good idea to release...
although we make the man frown for a few moments...
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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