Bed Time Senryu

Linked senryu

Silk Sheets

As smooth as velvet,

cool as ice upon our skin

as we slip right in.

26/09/20

 

Duvet

I love my duvet

as it wraps around my form

giving me a hug.

26/09/20

 

Pillow Talk

A place of comfort

where I rest my tired head

when I go to bed.

26/09/20

 

The Mattress

Firm yet quite giving,

supporting me through the night

'til dark becomes light.

27/09/20

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I enjoyed all of these John. Smug they were. All good wishes.

Chris

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And there was me thinking snug! Lol Thanks Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Oops typo :)) I did indeed mean snug ha ha!

[X]

I like the double entendre of the last line in the last haiku 😴

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks dear Kira. Bedtime is to be savoured, devoured and honoured.

[X]

Well then this is exactly what I am about to do😴

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Gosh I do hope so. Enjoy dear poetess!

[Cassie]

You need to get somebody so that we can get to read more poetry of how the duvet is now a person and the mattress well!!! what will it be?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah the secrets of the bed and the bed chamber Cassie. Most of us yearn for its flavours. Many thank yous again dear poetess.