A Woman's Heart

The heart of a woman is filled with chambers

with pathways to love

most warm and tender.

 

Dreams at night while she lies sleeping

as into her head

deep thoughts are creeping.

 

For love that is lost and love that is gained

the feelings are strong

and still remain.

 

A treasure chest of silver and gold

full of hidden stories

yet untold.

 

Deeper than the deepest ocean

with wave upon wave

of intense emotion.

 

A heart that is made of many chambers

and love to give

in sweet surrender.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The maternal instinct is so strong. When I read your lovely lines Dara, I thought of my position as a mother, grandmother and even more recently as a great grandmother. Those ties are so incredibly powerful, yet my love extends to other family members and indeed our family pets and friends and it runs deep. You are so right, there are many chambers in the heart of a woman. Thank you for sharing and a belated happy new year to you.

Chris

[Dara]

You have summed it up beautifully, Christine. The heart is like a sponge. The more there are to love the larger it gets. Congratulations on becoming a great grandmother! You certainly are a young vibrant one at that. It is great to see you and Happy New Year to you also.

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased to find a post from you Dara :)

[Patricia Wedel]

A woman is tender to nourish a baby and
a man will cherish the woman who carried
his child. They will give the child a world
of wisdom to sustain his or her vision. truly, Pat

[Dara]

Thank you Pat, for taking the time to read my poem and sharing your thoughts. To carry and nurture children is a blessing Indeed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

There is no comparison - not even to that of a father's love. I think women are born with that motherly instinct. It must be in our DNA, for it's always coming out in me. Wonderful writing, Dara!

[Dara]

Yes, it is just as the sunrises and sets, we have no control, it is so instinctive and I can see clearly how much it comes from you, by your writing alone. Thank you, Kelly :-)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you,my friend!

[SkinlessFrank]

this begs the question....what is a man's heart made of?

[Dara]

Yes it does. I have often wondered myself because most men I know are much less transparent than women.

[marilyn 1225]

what a beautiful ending to a loving poem as always written soo well... gorgeous and so much more

[Dara]

Thank you so much! Woman to woman, I know you can relate. It also takes alot of emotional stamina because so many depend on us. So very nice to see you here!

[...]

This poem goes very deep . Each line have emotional impact on my mind. I can feel love and I can feel protection and gentle ways of women heart. This poem is just feel great.

[Dara]

Oh thank you so very much. I am thrilled that you are able to feel the emotion behind it and that it gave you a good feeling.

[...]

You welcome . I just feel this is great poem.

[¿]

I've always felt and feel proud to be a woman. And this poem makes the pride width bigger!!
It was so lovely with the rhyming and words. Extremely beautiful Dara!!😊

[Dara]

I am so happy that my poem had this effect on you. Yes, women have so much to contribute and often go unrewarded. I think it is important that we celebrate where and when we can. Your review put a big smile on this woman's face :-)

[¿]

Beautiful your words Dara!! You're welcome 😊

[Karmee]

This is a very beautiful write, I enjoyed this

[Dara]

I so appreciate this lovely review and for taking the time to read my poem. Many thanks!

[Karmee]

Not a problem

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

In the chambers of becoming lost you are found wonderful words🌹

[Dara]

Well said! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem.

[mou]

being a woman what could I say more for it, probably it's the best write that describes us with so much intensity..your words are just BEAUTIFUL
mou.

[Dara]

Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed it and celebrate with you. Being a woman can be hard but I wouldn't want to change it for the world. "This is a man's world but it wouldn't be nothing, nothing without a woman or girl" (James Brown)

[mou]

you're absolutely right..such wonderful words of yours