Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams

Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Landing in a pile of feathers...

"
Being a Bunting by nature, 
you woo me with your songs 
Chasing me through the meadow 
we land in a pile of feathers... 

My Tanager heart wings toward you 
in colors of rhapsody in blue 
Turquoise tweets gather your 
heart's desire in serenades... 

© 2015 Patricia Wedel


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A lovely ode to the majesty of birds.

Lovingly described and worded, you can feel the writers emotions towards the birds in this poem, the beauty of their colours, the symphony of their songs......

A lovely allusion.....a pile of feathers......the pillow on which our head rests as we sleep and dream....
An eloquent poem, Pat. Very sweet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Doodley... Your review of "Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams"
has sent me on a voyage .. read more



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I would so love to fly
but if I had to fall
it would have to be
into a pile of feathers
these two stanzas
just about say it all
Neville :)


Posted 5 Months Ago


Your writing is always so soft and tender. You must be a gentle soul. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Kathie... I have known many gentle souls...
who hold the key to eternity... You have op.. read more
A lovely ode to the majesty of birds.

Lovingly described and worded, you can feel the writers emotions towards the birds in this poem, the beauty of their colours, the symphony of their songs......

A lovely allusion.....a pile of feathers......the pillow on which our head rests as we sleep and dream....
An eloquent poem, Pat. Very sweet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Doodley... Your review of "Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams"
has sent me on a voyage .. read more
Amazing use of words. The poem description create a meadow and a serenade. This is all we need. Thank you Patricia for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Coyote... So glad you enjoyed my poem, Buntings and Tanagers.
This is my favorite beca.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I enjoyed the place in the poem. Need some photos of the birds.
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear John, I agree, photos of the birds would be
breath-taking to view. You could Google ph.. read more
Being a musician, I really enjoyed this lovely poem with all of its musical terminology! Beautifully done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Sharon, lovely to cross paths with you again...
I remember you... 🎶 😇 truly Pat
i think this is marvelous .. the personification with the birds is brilliant ..with song and color .. and the love nest created is so innocent and very romantic .. with undertones of heat ..very enjoyable reading .. puts me in a very good state of mind to start my day!
E.
ps had to put this one in the ol' library!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear E... In my poem, Buntings and Tanagers in my Dreams,
in my reply to you I meant to infe.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

oh but you do ;) i didn't think that at all! :))
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Thank you E 🍁🎶🎻 you are too kind...
I really like the way you use the birds to write about love
welcome and I hope you keep writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Butterfly Desire... Your review is like
sweet nectar. I appreciate your review.
read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Birds are an inspiration for me. truly, Pat
butterfly desire

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome ,and thank you
for becoming my friend
I dreamt last night that a monitor lizard wanted to curl up with me like a cat. But then a bird without feathers is a but a lizard or so the scientist say. The love was felt but the feathers and fur definitely missed. A splendid, splendid write, Pat.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Pryde... Your review of my poem, Buntings
and Tanagers in my Dreams, is surreal and sci.. read more
Beautifully expressed. Lovely write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Moon, how charming that you would
review my poem of Bunting and Tanager
romance.. read more
Beautifully sculpted dear poetess. dana

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Dana... Birds are beautifully sculpted
and very passionate as they wing their way to read more

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