Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams

Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Landing in a pile of feathers...

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Being a Bunting by nature, 
you woo me with your songs 
Chasing me through the meadow 
we land in a pile of feathers... 

My Tanager heart wings toward you 
in colors of rhapsody in blue 
Turquoise tweets gather your 
heart's desire in serenades... 

© 2015 Patricia Wedel


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A lovely ode to the majesty of birds.

Lovingly described and worded, you can feel the writers emotions towards the birds in this poem, the beauty of their colours, the symphony of their songs......

A lovely allusion.....a pile of feathers......the pillow on which our head rests as we sleep and dream....
An eloquent poem, Pat. Very sweet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Doodley... Your review of "Buntings and Tanagers in my dreams"
has sent me on a voyage .. read more



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Charming to the bones. Serenading to the depths...Wonderful as always...:)...................

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Sami, you give a review of
heart and soul that makes romance
breathe like Humme.. read more
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome. ...:).....
You woo your reader with romantic musings, Pat...I am loving the attention to color!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Kelly, Your review of Buntings and
Tanagers has given me pause for basking
in t.. read more
Short and sweet... a lovely little romantic poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Dale, Yiur review of my poem,
Buntings and Tanagers, has touched my
heart. Rom.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

I am glad to hear that. I loe touching beautiful hearts like yours.
Aha.. so this is where the charm and colour of gentle poetry lies! I truly want to close my eyes and look and look at the way your words sing. They're tightly cosy and yet all embracing. Maybe i've landed in that 'pile of feathers'...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Emmajoy, your review of Buntings and
Tanagers fill my dreams is almost like a sonnet..... read more
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Your poem's lovely, truly lovely.
Beautifully romantic words, Pat! Love birds singing sweet serenades to one another.....heavy sigh. You have such a romantic soul, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Lydi, your review is charming as always.
Landing in a pile of feathers seems to suit <.. read more
Its good, but how good? I always look at things wondering how to tweak them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Adam, I appreciate your reading
my poem. Birds are so inspirational
to me in m.. read more
this is so cool...when i was a kid i had these little plastic models of birds that i painted...the first two i had were the Bunting and the Tanager...

i like the mix of colors here and the music of Rhapsody in Blue...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Jacob, how charming that you painted a
Bunting and a Tanager model bird as a boy.
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Patricia Wedel

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 15 and Madeline age 11; also Shannah age 5 and sister Kahless age 3; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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