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Spring Dreams

Spring Dreams

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Bluebirds and butterflies

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Once upon a meadow green 
Butterflies sang in harmony... 

Breezes of lilac and wild roses 
hummed lullabies by 
streams of memories... 

Bluebirds flew above the clouds 
like Angels on a mission of 
granting wishes... 

A soft rain fell upon tulips and 
daffodils where Robins gather 
twigs and forget me nots... 

The earth smiles and the sun 
winks as if new beginnings peek 
from under possibilities... 

© 2018 Patricia Wedel


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Wonderful and beautiful words shared dear Pat.
"The earth smiles and the sun
winks as if new beginnings peek
from under possibilities"
I agree with the above lines and I'm waiting for the warm days of Spring. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear John... waiting for birth like an expectant father can be sleepless nights of wishing and wanti.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree Fran. New life make us learn new hope.



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Your poem is appealing and charming to read on this cloudy day where I am. The descriptions and images are engaging and vivid to think about. Nature is where healing takes place if we're open to its many serene treasures.

Nicely done, Patricia.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The weather over here has been unpredictable; a choice between T shirts and rainproof coats. Last weekend however was lovely and I took my son Charlie to a local country park. Nothing commercial there aside from a small cafe, (teas and snacks, ice creams.) it's just nature allowed to get on with it's business; and it is so very peaceful.

We went for a walk around the lake, watched the ducks and the swans and various other wildfowl happily getting on with their lives; then at the far end of the park, we came across some rabbits playing in a field and Charlie was utterly enchanted.

Nature has so much beauty on offer and your poem sums that up perfectly.

Beccy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Becky... I loved hearing about your walk with Charlie... the most precious times were walking w.. read more
You captured the beauty of a field of flowers and how they make you feel.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Nancy... Your review of Spring Dreams is charming. I agree flowers in Spring give you a feelin.. read more
This has such a fresh and feel good vibe to it. Such lovely imagery paints an enchanting setting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Ana... your review of Spring Dreams has captured my heart. Now the soul of summer will appear .. read more
Breathtaking picture and absolutely lovely poem..lyrical, fresh, exuberant words and imagery. Love the “winking sun”! Winking back to you Pat!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Annette... you can be the winking sun and I will be the smiling earth... thanks for stopping by.. read more
Your words really remind me of an artist gradually vovering a canvas.. the whole is such a beautiful visual.. calm, colvful and where I''d love to be sitting here and now. Bright-eyed robim looking, head gong this-way that!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Emmajoy ... thanks for stopping by.
We have so many Robins in our yard. This Village .. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

What a colourful tweet/treat (me trying to be clever!) selection of birds you have to see, wonder .. read more
A beautiful piece of art! Love how the poem melts into the reader's emotions.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Atsugi... Spring violets beckon a symphony of lovely colors of love ad devotion. May you step .. read more
Your words( Spring )eternal as a reflection of this marvelous season. Dreams have essence as your magic wands of poetry. Truly poetic...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Sami... love your review... “words Spring eternal”. Even the light snow we had a day ago c.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Marvelous. You are very welcome.
A lovely write in tune with nature, our only Allie


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Andrew... Spring is an orchestra of buds bursting in overtures of beauty.... the movements in k.. read more
So beautiful! Nature is already so amazing and so attractive and you made it even more beautiful.... I loved this so much! Keep writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

2 Years Ago

such a beautiful and poetic reply.
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Anjali... the Spring Moon 🌙 smiles like the first smile... quoting a poem... “Morning.. read more
Anjali

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 16 and Madeline age 12; also Shannah age 7 and sister Kahless age 5; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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