Sky Writng

Sky Writng

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Kaleidoscope eyes... wings of blue...

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If birds could write poetry with 

wings dipped in azure blue... 

our world would radiate feelings of 

adventure into seasons of the moon... 

When flowers bloom in glory borne 

with music played by troubadours... 

gardens become a lovely 

kaleidoscope dance floor where 

lovers breathe Je t' adore... 

© 2018 Patricia Wedel


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lovers and strangers flying together in an azure sky...there is glory in a garden of differences...we all have wings to fly if we do it with kindness...the sky will never be too crowded.
i like your one line, made me see all those birds and then Lucy with Diamonds looking up and admiring them all, wishing she could fly.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Jacob... diamonds cannot compare to being able to fly with precision. Even the genius ones who.. read more
Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Jacob, my husband Roger explained to me about Lucy and the diamonds... very clever of you... I .. read more



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Patricia, this is such a beautiful poem.
The wonders of nature...


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Ana... so charming of you to review “Sky Writing”. We had a number of Bluejays swoop down .. read more
First of all, Patricia, I love the photo included.
This is simple and loving of the natural world.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Steppenwolf

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Steppenwolf... thank you for reading “Sky Writing”. Birds of many colors grace our world a.. read more
Oh how beautiful that would be- but their beauty already paints a wonderful picture of beauty love and grace without taking place in any other form shape - the colours beauty of nature is a masterpiece in itself- wonderful words of love and appreciation🌹

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Kelly... the birds are an inspiration... you are correct. I appreciate your review of Sky Writ.. read more
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A beautiful poem, Pat...

If the birds could write poetry, such wondrous tales they could tell. Of lands unknown, places seen, by only those born of wing and blessed with complete freedom. And the sky itself would radiate with all the feathered colours of their variety.

Again, you have written a piece dipped in the ink of the wondrous beauty that surrounds us. A wonderful poem. Soothing, wistful and delicate.



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Doodley... I appreciate your wistful wonder of the ones born of wing... we are blessed with all.. read more
You've penned a perfect daydream. A picture a winged poets doodling romance in the clouds while singing love tunes above the gardens...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear B. Boileau... I appreciate your review of Sky Writing... nature is always drawing dreams in the.. read more
Your thoughts in this poem Pat are so lovely. Totally drawn in by the first couple of lines. A beautiful read.

Thank you

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Chris... thank you for reading “Sky Writing”. There are so many my signs written in the sk.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Pat. Enjoy the rest of your day.

Chris
Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Chris... I meant to say... there are so many signs written in the sky.
"When flowers bloom in glory borne

with music played by troubadours...

gardens become a lovely

kaleidoscope dance floor "

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Sami... thanks for reading Sky Writing. Birds have the most beautiful feather pens to write in.. read more
This is lovely Patricia. Seeing beauty in everything with kaleidoscope eyes. Sometimes beauty can come from the most unexpected of places, and thoughts. I can picture the writer watching birds glide and swoop as the wind blows garden scents all around. A beautiful picture.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Lorry... forgive my lateness... I appreciate your reading Sky Wruting.
Your review is .. read more
That is such a romantically visual poem! You've told of the birds' wing-shapes in the azure sky... '.. music played by troubadours... ' and then, oh then.. mentioned perfume permeating space! You've used the senses in such a colourful manner and made Nature buzz with love.. sweet love. Brava, Patricia. x

Posted 5 Years Ago


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emmajoy

5 Years Ago

Perhaps, perhaps, maybe.. there's something in the air come almost mid.Summer?!
Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

Your words would make a sweet
Poem... truly, Pat
emmajoy

5 Years Ago

Needing a quiet thought, will see what i can do.. if you don't hear from me again... am on my way to.. read more
I was immediately captivated by your title and then your words just pulled me in. Very lovely, light and romantic. If only birds could write poetry, if only...... A truly beautiful piece of writing, Pat.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Dara... I am captivated by your review... Birds are amazing as they fly about like gypsies wit.. read more

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