Summer's Wind

Lost in the mist of loving you 

Lost in the kiss of holding you... 

The warmth of the sun through summer's wind 

the sound of your voice like a violin... 

The howl of a wolf entertains as dreams 

become a canopy of secret pleasures... 

Playful moments lie in meadows sweet 

your eyes and mine in a peaceful sleep... 

Flowers sway to lilting laughter and 

happy ever after... 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem contains so many sensory delights that define summer for me, starting with the ever-present wind (being near the coast). I love the way you pick words with similar sounds like (mist . . . kiss) and (sweet . . . sleep). I love the way you include something for all the senses. Loving, playing, sleeping, and laughing . . . your poem is filled with the sensations of summer love (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie... my muse must be an angel.... I woke in the middle of the night and thought of these lines.
You could have given me a candle from heaven, as I had lost my inspiration... so I really appreciate your review. You are so generous. fondly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Really happy to hear this & I hope your angel muse visits on other hot August nights to come! *smile*

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous. Your poems bring us the bright romance, the serenading violens under the canopy of dreams.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... wonderful to find you in the wind chimes
melody of love. I appreciate your presence...
truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

A melodious welcome.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear poets... summer rain smiles on those who dream...
truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And how wonderful and free to dream for you and me- smiles being sent your way- to brighten every day🌹

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... so blessed to share dreams...
poetry gives us a venue to look over the rainbow and into the light. May your path be strewn with fragrant roses... with love, Pat