Reborn in a Summer Storm

Reborn in a Summer Storm

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

That feathery feeling when 

your eyes draw me in like 

the wind on a Summer day... 

Caressing the scent of spices 

in a meadow sweet... 

When flowers bloom in the 

embrace of a thunder storm 

I am reborn... 

© 2019 Patricia Wedel


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yes, it is a feathery feeling isn't it?
when another's eyes can draw us in...i have always been an "eye" person...most important feature.
and i like how you mix the images of the violent thunderstorm with rebirth and the flowers loving it and growing from it.
just like humans who grow from the storms in their lives.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear Jacob... I love the feelings you have about my poem. It is true that a thunderstorm can stir u.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

When Spring bursts forth like a budding romance.



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just pure poetry on pure love, doesn't get much better than that. A lovely write.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Loved the ethereal nature of this, spent many a wet night dancing in thunder storms,

Posted 5 Months Ago


Glance of romance and fully entranced...A complete picture painted in so few lines very nicely done prose of a mutual embrace of gazes. "Lovely lovely lovely!" says the bunny:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely- a little whisper of a poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Just reading your title in my read request bin, I was already smiling & feeling a little jolt of recognition. Your poem far exceeds my expectations, tho. This is so gracefully stated, your writing is an illustration of the seductive scene you describe. I love the way you use "reborn" . . . could sound corny or trendy, but you summon the true meaning of the word in the reader's mind. Thanks for RR'ing me, I've been sketchy at the cafe, but I never want to miss your writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear Margie... Spring fever is a romantic condition and it is contagious... it can be tempered with .. read more
barleygirl

6 Months Ago

Clearly you've been struck big time. Your everyday conversation sounds so lyrical, it could stand as.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

Thank you Margie... I was born in 1940, so I shall always be forty... but when I take my last breat.. read more
Filled with romance and desire, Pat. The eyes say so much and when they do they bring on feelings! Your words are elegantly sensual. Loved this one. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear Lydi... my muse is so explicitly delicious when the wind brings blossoms of endearment as I rea.. read more
Gosh this is so whimsically beautiful!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear John... the blossoms in Spring are whimsical and you have sprinkled fairy dust on wonderlust. .. read more
Love has both... the feathery touch and the thunderstorm, and both make us feel alive....

May your flowers always be refreshed by such love, Pat...

Wonderful poem Pat,

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear Curt... your gentle touch has calmed the storm... as flowers romance and dance in summer rain. .. read more
oh man Pat ..i sure channeled this poem this morning ... i took my dog Beauregard out around 2 AM (i am an early riser) and when i do that so many times the scent in the air absolutely takes me to so many good places in memory ... when that ozone of a summer storm is on the wing it is wonderful ...and what a gift it is, to be drawn into such blessed peace and comforting love by another's eyes ... loved the experience reading your poem gave me ... i read it out loud first off .. very natural flow says i!
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

back at ya Pat ... your one of the reasons the Cafe' is the place for me ;)
Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

You are like a Rocker and a Swing on a front porch ... so full of good feelings. truly, Pat
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

well....a Rocker and a Swinger eh!? ... i guess i'll take that :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))).. read more
yes, it is a feathery feeling isn't it?
when another's eyes can draw us in...i have always been an "eye" person...most important feature.
and i like how you mix the images of the violent thunderstorm with rebirth and the flowers loving it and growing from it.
just like humans who grow from the storms in their lives.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear Jacob... I love the feelings you have about my poem. It is true that a thunderstorm can stir u.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

When Spring bursts forth like a budding romance.

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