Reborn in a Summer Storm

That feathery feeling when 

your eyes draw me in like 

the wind on a Summer day... 

Caressing the scent of spices 

in a meadow sweet... 

When flowers bloom in the 

embrace of a thunder storm 

I am reborn... 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is a feathery feeling isn't it?
when another's eyes can draw us in...i have always been an "eye" person...most important feature.
and i like how you mix the images of the violent thunderstorm with rebirth and the flowers loving it and growing from it.
just like humans who grow from the storms in their lives.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... I love the feelings you have about my poem. It is true that a thunderstorm can stir up a lot of passion when Spring bursts Firth like a budding Rimance and leaves us bathing in the aftermath of peaceful petals floating away like precious memories. I appreciate your review and wish you sweet dreams of summer storms. Truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

When Spring bursts forth like a budding romance.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and beautiful poetry shared dear Pat.
"When flowers bloom in the
embrace of a thunder storm
I am reborn... "
I loved the above lines. I like the big storms too. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John... I wish I could recapture those days of Thunder when skies were an orchestrated vision of Leonard Cohen’s Hallelujah... You are an Instrument of G-d
and his Mercy. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Pat and you are welcome my kind friend.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a wonderfully and sweetly woven bit of romance you present us with here. Like laying in a clover field watching the fluffy white clouds pass over. I very much enjoyed.

[andrew mitchell]

just pure poetry on pure love, doesn't get much better than that. A lovely write.

[Shazbatt969]

Loved the ethereal nature of this, spent many a wet night dancing in thunder storms,

[Robert Trakofler]

Glance of romance and fully entranced...A complete picture painted in so few lines very nicely done prose of a mutual embrace of gazes. "Lovely lovely lovely!" says the bunny:)

[TL Boehm]

This is lovely- a little whisper of a poem.

[barleygirl]

Just reading your title in my read request bin, I was already smiling & feeling a little jolt of recognition. Your poem far exceeds my expectations, tho. This is so gracefully stated, your writing is an illustration of the seductive scene you describe. I love the way you use "reborn" . . . could sound corny or trendy, but you summon the true meaning of the word in the reader's mind. Thanks for RR'ing me, I've been sketchy at the cafe, but I never want to miss your writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie... Spring fever is a romantic condition and it is contagious... it can be tempered with poetry when twilight lingers on the horizon. Romance is a state of mind and can only be cured by birdsong and tender touches of melancholy. It requires an ounce of affection and three inunces of
persuasion. Thanks for taking time to join the Occasion of honeysuckle Wine. As ever, Pat

[barleygirl]

Clearly you've been struck big time. Your everyday conversation sounds so lyrical, it could stand as a poem on its own! *wink! wink!*

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Margie... I was born in 1940, so I shall always be forty... but when I take my last breath, I will be Ageless. I appreciate your lovely comments. Poetry is my epitaph and has enveloped my innermost thoughts... just simple poetry that I can comprehend. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with romance and desire, Pat. The eyes say so much and when they do they bring on feelings! Your words are elegantly sensual. Loved this one. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi... my muse is so explicitly delicious when the wind brings blossoms of endearment as I read your review. Thank you, Pat

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Gosh this is so whimsically beautiful!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... the blossoms in Spring are whimsical and you have sprinkled fairy dust on wonderlust. Thank you, Pat

[redzone]

Love has both... the feathery touch and the thunderstorm, and both make us feel alive....

May your flowers always be refreshed by such love, Pat...

Wonderful poem Pat,

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Curt... your gentle touch has calmed the storm... as flowers romance and dance in summer rain. truly, Pat