Honey Bee my Valentine

Honey Bee my Valentine

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
"

Your sting is sweet and inviting...

"
February has Honey Bees with lists of orders  

from Lovers who know that the sweetness of 

lasting love can only come from a honeycomb... 

There's a buzz of bees busy as can be heard 

wrapped in cartons with flowers inside and 

endearing words of amour for girls in the 

latest style with hair held up with butterflies 

with colored ribbons and red hearts... 

Bee Mine Sweetheart.  

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Reading this, I felt like I was being swarmed by a buzzing plethora of sensations & I love the contrasts in your topsy-turvy message of stinging attraction. This is the height of uninhibited rambling, using whatever unexpected imagery tumbles out, not being overly fussy about the order & arrangement of words which can take the spunk out of a msg. You've captured the lovely messy stinging pleasure & pain that love almost always is! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

that might be why it is so expensive to get now...
barleygirl

11 Months Ago

Aha! You are a regular sleuth! Thanks for the info & since you've got so much time on your hands, it.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

ah do i wish i had so much time on my hands...ha ha..

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Hello dear Pat. My grandmother told me often. Everyday must be Valentine day, when you love someone.
"There's a buzz of bees busy as can be heard
wrapped in cartons with flowers inside and
endearing words of amour for girls in the
latest style with hair held up with butterflies
with colored ribbons and red hearts."
I love the above lines. Thank you for sharing the beautiful poem for love.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


I like this concept, Patricia! Good job, I think it is super creative and interesting. Good write! I hope are holding up well during all of the virus stuff.

James

Posted 9 Months Ago


Bee poems make me feel fuzzy and warm always (love Plath's poems about bees!)
Your light hearted and whimsically pure poetry is really appreciated especially in times as these.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Months Ago

dear fairest... so delighted to have you visit...
Honey is essential as are the Bees as they.. read more
And may it be one that. Last the love of time...every day you should be a valentine ...wonderful web of innocence🌹

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

Dear “thoughts”... the glow of Hearts lasts through the Winter snow and into the Spring Fever ro.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

11 Months Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) sure appreciate the innocence and sweet nectar in your Honey Bee poem... if he says no ... he's a crazy galoot :)))) delightful read .. inspires the feel good in me ...magical imaging ..especially like the hair held up by butterflies
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Gene... you are Connoisseur of
stylish girls with butterflies ... who deliver
.. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

:) ...................... dance all night says i!
Love the poem and the ending, Patricia.
You're very pleasurable to read. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Relic... a charming review is a Valentine
in its self... on the shelf... where memor.. read more
A clever title for a cleverly sweet poem. A very enjoyable read.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

Thank you Dale... Bees 🐝 need credit for keeping us “in Clover” as they say. Their Sting is .. read more
Bouquets, butterflies and bees. What beautiful imagery you have given your readers Pat. I can breathe in the intoxicating scent of flowers and love. Happy Valentine's day. The sweetest of poems surely.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Chris... Valentines are healing notes that
touch the loneliest of lovers who dream o.. read more
Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

Chris... may you and yours have a lovely day as you dance and romance to love and the music of Mozar.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

11 Months Ago

Thank you Pat for these lovely thoughts. I hope your Valentine's day is all you wish for.
read more
Excellent play on words and concept. Dripping with honey and flying on wings of fancy. You bring fresh air and romance to this site. Your imaginations and observations are the stuff of an artist in words.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Sami... I am swept away by your flight of fancy. An artist who paints the colors of love is.. read more
Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

May your day be blessed with the music of Artie Shaw
with emotions of waves upon the Ocean. .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

Same to you . So true. You are welcome muchly.
such a sweet Valentine
write here complete with
Honey bees and the buzzing of amour filling
February's air..every breeze
whispering. the sweetest
bouquet of budding romance and love..as
always ..beautifully penned
dear Pat..

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Fran... you have a tender heart as you sing your review with melodies tried and true. May C.. read more

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 17 and Madeline age 13; also Shannah age 8 and sister Kahless age 6; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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