Honey Bee my Valentine

Honey Bee my Valentine

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
"

Your sting is sweet and inviting...

"
February has Honey Bees with lists of orders  

from Lovers who know that the sweetness of 

lasting love can only come from a honeycomb... 

There's a buzz of bees busy as can be heard 

wrapped in cartons with flowers inside and 

endearing words of amour for girls in the 

latest style with hair held up with butterflies 

with colored ribbons and red hearts... 

Bee Mine Sweetheart.  

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Reading this, I felt like I was being swarmed by a buzzing plethora of sensations & I love the contrasts in your topsy-turvy message of stinging attraction. This is the height of uninhibited rambling, using whatever unexpected imagery tumbles out, not being overly fussy about the order & arrangement of words which can take the spunk out of a msg. You've captured the lovely messy stinging pleasure & pain that love almost always is! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

that might be why it is so expensive to get now...
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Aha! You are a regular sleuth! Thanks for the info & since you've got so much time on your hands, it.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

ah do i wish i had so much time on my hands...ha ha..

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And may it be one that. Last the love of time...every day you should be a valentine ...wonderful web of innocence🌹

Posted 18 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Hours Ago

Dear “thoughts”... the glow of Hearts lasts through the Winter snow and into the Spring Fever ro.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

10 Hours Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) sure appreciate the innocence and sweet nectar in your Honey Bee poem... if he says no ... he's a crazy galoot :)))) delightful read .. inspires the feel good in me ...magical imaging ..especially like the hair held up by butterflies
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dearest Gene... you are Connoisseur of
stylish girls with butterflies ... who deliver
.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

:) ...................... dance all night says i!
Love the poem and the ending, Patricia.
You're very pleasurable to read. :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dearest Relic... a charming review is a Valentine
in its self... on the shelf... where memor.. read more
A clever title for a cleverly sweet poem. A very enjoyable read.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Thank you Dale... Bees 🐝 need credit for keeping us “in Clover” as they say. Their Sting is .. read more
Bouquets, butterflies and bees. What beautiful imagery you have given your readers Pat. I can breathe in the intoxicating scent of flowers and love. Happy Valentine's day. The sweetest of poems surely.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dearest Chris... Valentines are healing notes that
touch the loneliest of lovers who dream o.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Chris... may you and yours have a lovely day as you dance and romance to love and the music of Mozar.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

Thank you Pat for these lovely thoughts. I hope your Valentine's day is all you wish for.
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Excellent play on words and concept. Dripping with honey and flying on wings of fancy. You bring fresh air and romance to this site. Your imaginations and observations are the stuff of an artist in words.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dearest Sami... I am swept away by your flight of fancy. An artist who paints the colors of love is.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

May your day be blessed with the music of Artie Shaw
with emotions of waves upon the Ocean. .. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

Same to you . So true. You are welcome muchly.
such a sweet Valentine
write here complete with
Honey bees and the buzzing of amour filling
February's air..every breeze
whispering. the sweetest
bouquet of budding romance and love..as
always ..beautifully penned
dear Pat..

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dearest Fran... you have a tender heart as you sing your review with melodies tried and true. May C.. read more
Awwww, such a sweet write. I can see butterflies artfully placed in a lovely hairdo and hear bees buzzing about in bouquets meant for sweethearts. Lovely imagery, Pat. Lydi***

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Week Ago

I can picture you with those butterflies in your hair, my friend. You are a free spirit!
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Hi Lydi... I bought the Butterfly clips with strands of colored hair at Claire’s boutique for my g.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

I am a poet and an 👩‍🎨 artist ... Amen
You really are a sweetheart, Pat! It's poets like you who keep the cafe moving in the way it should! Your words are kind and charming.. and most of all bring smiles to me and undoubtedly others. Just did what I normal would not, that is to read Margie's review. Intrigued to read about Sting from both of you.. cos could I please raise my hand - love Fields of Gold.

Dear friend, many thanks for your special gift. Please spread it around like the first class pollinator you are. Hugs. xx

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dear Em... I will always be a Humble 🐝 Bee. So many talented well bred and well read poets to ke.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Sending you hugs and Lady Bugs ... Pat
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Caught and .... much appreciated, petal!

You got some extraordinary imagery in this post.. one can not read the words without smiling.. well at least that applies to this here hard man..... hair held up with butterflies makes me feel kinda dreamy.....

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago

Oh err Matron 🦋🌼🦜
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

I posted a poem entitled "Neville the Kookaburra Bird ... if you care to read my tweet. as ever, .. read more
Neville

1 Week Ago

Now there's an offer a guy can't refuse.... :)

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 16 and Madeline age 12; also Shannah age 7 and sister Kahless age 5; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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