The best part of this poem is your playfulness & imagination. This might be the furthest ANYONE has taken personification of something from nature . . . you set the scene so strikingly, along with a mighty sassy feathery who really seems to think she CAN compete with ole Kate! *wink! wink!* This modesty is not to be believed, in my estimation. Ms. PEPburn (the bird) knows she can kick the pants off anything that comes out of Hollywood! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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dearest Margie... so much fun to share this poem with you. Love the way you view this as being play.. read moredearest Margie... so much fun to share this poem with you. Love the way you view this as being playful. I really wish Katherine Hepburn could read my poem. You are the closest to having her attitude. I am looking forward to reading your book with all your expressions. Charmed and feathery, Pat
Wow congrats you poetess of world acclaim , glad you told us and you do seem to be great in your own right and don't compare with others I guuess. Just continue to turn out such fantastic poems as this,
Kudos to this sensational sassy poem!
Pls Pleez do read and comment on my newest poem.
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dear Zaynab... like the idea of my poem being sassy... as the Actress Katharine Hepburn was a bit sa.. read moredear Zaynab... like the idea of my poem being sassy... as the Actress Katharine Hepburn was a bit sassy. Hope your Spring will be beautiful with blossoms and choruses of Bird songs. truly, Pat
A lovely poem dedicated to a great actress beautifully written Pat .
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Thank you Katrina ... Katherine had a voice that was vulnerable and e felt her moments... she was on.. read moreThank you Katrina ... Katherine had a voice that was vulnerable and e felt her moments... she was one of a kind. She could play people like a hand of Poker. Now that's another poem. Glad you enjoyed the poem. As ever, Pat
I read Hepburn's autobiography entitled, "Me". She was an interesting and intelligent woman, outspoken and brave. Our fine feathered friend would likely be lauded by Katherine as she was a great lover of the outdoors as well. An interesting read, I enjoyed.
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dear Fabian... I really miss Katherine.. she seemed like family... at least she stole our heart in m.. read moredear Fabian... I really miss Katherine.. she seemed like family... at least she stole our heart in many ways. Thank you for reading. As ever, Pat
You re-created that era for me. Lovely and imaginative.
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dear Rania... thank you for your charming review of Audition at Stage Door. Be blessed. truly, Pat.. read moredear Rania... thank you for your charming review of Audition at Stage Door. Be blessed. truly, Pat
Pat, as a fellow bird lover, I truly enjoyed this poem. Not only do I see the colors and imagine the sounds, I get the attitude you've expressed here. Katherine Hepburn's prime came before I my time, but I remember her well with John Wayne in Rooster Cogburn (U.S. Marshal). Even without looking at the scene, we know her voice, much like the birds in our garden. A fine, entertaining work, Pat.
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dear R.E. As a young actress Katherine was in a movie entitled Stage Door and then later she starre.. read moredear R.E. As a young actress Katherine was in a movie entitled Stage Door and then later she starred with Gary Grant and James Stuart in Philadelphia Story which is a must see movie Classic. Thanks for your wonderful review. As ever, Pat
The best part of this poem is your playfulness & imagination. This might be the furthest ANYONE has taken personification of something from nature . . . you set the scene so strikingly, along with a mighty sassy feathery who really seems to think she CAN compete with ole Kate! *wink! wink!* This modesty is not to be believed, in my estimation. Ms. PEPburn (the bird) knows she can kick the pants off anything that comes out of Hollywood! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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dearest Margie... so much fun to share this poem with you. Love the way you view this as being play.. read moredearest Margie... so much fun to share this poem with you. Love the way you view this as being playful. I really wish Katherine Hepburn could read my poem. You are the closest to having her attitude. I am looking forward to reading your book with all your expressions. Charmed and feathery, Pat
Rose Garden...wonderful and always original like you can only do....a beautiful heart soul and I’m so honoured to be graced by the place your hand makes sweet love to your pen...🌹
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dear Kelly... You are a Rose Garden with your poems of vintage roses on every page... we are privile.. read moredear Kelly... You are a Rose Garden with your poems of vintage roses on every page... we are privileged to read your lovely poetry. Thank you for leaving your heart print on my poem. Best wishes for a beautiful Spring sooner than we expect. truly, Pat
Oh how my heart wishes for that but is content with what is here and now...beauty and all things mag.. read moreOh how my heart wishes for that but is content with what is here and now...beauty and all things magical be yours always....🌹
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Thank you dear Kelly... 'Tis the time of year I yearn for Tulips and daffodils... and violets too. .. read moreThank you dear Kelly... 'Tis the time of year I yearn for Tulips and daffodils... and violets too. Amen... Pat
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Oh the beauty of them all ...the colours the textures ...just the beauty of simplicity...🌹
Lynn Anderson would smile upon this poem...
and if the director were to not be impressed, then he could go sit in the garden and ponder the chance he lost to make a star shine in his movie...
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dear Jacob... how charming... Lynn Anderson sang
"I Never Promised You A Rose Garden". You .. read moredear Jacob... how charming... Lynn Anderson sang
"I Never Promised You A Rose Garden". You have brought a Smile to my 'Smitten Heart. truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..