Betrothed

Betrothed

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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An Ocean of dreams where hearts entwine...

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My darling Melodrama... 

Your blue green eyes as sweet as 

Iris in Spring-time rhapsodies 

take my breath away in  fields 

of Heather where lovers lay... 

Come into the Chapel of my arms 

where prayers are whispered upon 

a cloud of secret promises... 

My heart is freely given.  

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Your poem reminds me of the "good ole days" when people often had outdoor ceremonies for all kinds of blissful or faithful reasons, with all of nature & imagination in attendance. "Whenever two or more of you are gathered in His name, there is LOVE" (The Wedding Song, which I sang a hundred times at such get-togethers, back then). I kinda miss having that wildly optimistic outlook, where everything warm & fuzzy was something to be honored & celebrated . . . nowadays, not so much enthusiasm with too many pockets of hopelessness. Your poem brings it all back like it once was, but some young whippersnapper chided me for looking back too often in my writing -- ha! ha! They're just jealous their youth won't be something as sacred to look back upon, I sadly surmise! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Splendidly romantic words, Pat. There is an old fashioned feel to this one....and it is lovely. Downright magical! What we all need to read now that the real world is so ugly. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


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I love the way your words flow in this beautifully written poem .
Kind regards Katrina

Posted 3 Years Ago


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You convert dark to light with your lovely thoughts, Pat and, in the process use such great language. Thank you so very much. Keep safe and well, please. Love to your both. Virtual hugs and smiles.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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oh i love how you personify "melodrama" here.
and speak to it as lovely, and giving your heart to it.
so mystical..and romantic.
a wonderful intermission to the awful movie that is playing right now in our real lives.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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