Morning sunrise awakenings

Morning sunrise awakenings

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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where still blue waters embrace the Sky

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The feathers of Sunrise spread her wings 

Artichokes lie in soft green rows of 

delicious moments dipped in creamy kisses... 

Rhubarb tucked in apple pies with crusts as tender as 

moonlight embracing Venus the evening Star... 

Rhubarb rendezvous and apple blossom promises 

of a romantic Cruise on the Blue Danube... 

A Meadowlark sings in gardens where 

love and blue skies hold secrets of seeds 

planted under a New Moon in May... 

 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Pat, this is downright magical....the loveliness of waking up to the smell of baking in the kitchen, the starry night, the song of a meadowlark.....such intricate imagery and I loved imagining it all. I hope May is a better month for all of us! Great poem. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Lydia... I love Artichoke hearts dipped in butter and I also adore rhubarb with apples in a pie.. read more


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Your free association style in this one reminds me of the way our minds hopscotch thru so many sensory delights . . . one minute we're looking at a rhubarb plant & the next minute we're tasting that pie & remembering when old aunt flo could still throw down some celebratory moves on a holiday. This shows a trajectory I prefer to the grinding that some revert to with an idle mind. It's amazing how a few minutes of watching the birds & wild creatures can erase an hour of scrolling thru political memes, making want to dance in our minds, if not on wobbly legs! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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ah yes... those meadow larks have got a thing to answer for haven't they... this has got so many dreamy images in it my imaginings are working overtime .. think I'll aim for an early night :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

22 Hours Ago

dear Neville... an early night might give you a chance to dream of home-made pies where skies are tw.. read more
Neville

7 Hours Ago


I'll take two pies, a flan and half a dozen crumpets... :)
more wonderful moments Pat
our rhubarb has now found its way into our desert tray with more tasty fruits to come

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

22 Hours Ago

dearest Dave... I am a bit late to thank you for sharing your taste for rhubarb... of course it take.. read more
'A Meadowlark sings in gardens where - love and blue skies hold secrets of seeds - planted under a New Moon in May ' Such an especially lovely scene, full of colour, peace, emotion. The entire poem is a true gift, dear Pat. Thank you. Keep safe. Em xx

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Grinning here, let's say I'll try any adventure, Pat! More than likely never a master always a stud.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Em... love that you would be charmed by a virtuoso playing the Piano while tending to her la.. read more
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Lawn done, piano played. (Now for a sit down, cuppa and probably a zzz.) Sunshine weather but bu.. read more
Such a wonderful surprise that both our latest postings have the "morning sun" in the title. You had me at the first line, so evocative of being transported via the rays of the sun into the rest of your verses! I hear that Meadowlark so clearly, send to me please a packet of those seeds . . .

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear C.M. ... it is swerendipity to write about the Sun
May it be an Omen for better things.. read more
Beautiful comparison between the rhubarbs and moonlight embracing Venus. I can imagine the soft sunrise of early May. It rained here recently during the dawn, and the sunrise was so spectacular when the clouds parted. Thanks for sharing such uplifting poetry! ♡

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear fairest... it seems that the Sky has become our Refuge during this time of uncertainty. The Wi.. read more
So beautiful dear Pat. The description made me see and believe every words. I loved how you used the language. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest John... the language of love is like dipping kisses of artichoke hearts under apple trees wh.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are welcome dear Pat.
I almost got hungry reading this one. All the images had a sensuousness and peacefulness about them. This is the kind of thing we need after reading the latest accounting of the exploits of Covid-19.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest John... so
Glad you enjoyed reading about treats during this time when social distanc.. read more
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Rye
This is just so lovely, very beautiful write

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Rye... thanks for reading about treats that stir our Soul and lift our Spirit at a time when we.. read more
"under a new moon in May" ... ohhhhhhhh how lively to read .. so Romantic ... dreamy, delicious, extravagant in colors and tastes .. so glad to have this experience this morning, Pat! thanks so much for sharing
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest E... I will always remember going to College in Napa Valley at age 19 where steamed Artichok.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

what warm memories Pat! how fortunate we are for them eh!? blessings my friend!

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