Morning sunrise awakenings

Morning sunrise awakenings

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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where still blue waters embrace the Sky

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The feathers of Sunrise spread her wings 

Artichokes lie in soft green rows of 

delicious moments dipped in creamy kisses... 

Rhubarb tucked in apple pies with crusts as tender as 

moonlight embracing Venus the evening Star... 

Rhubarb rendezvous and apple blossom promises 

of a romantic Cruise on the Blue Danube... 

A Meadowlark sings in gardens where 

love and blue skies hold secrets of seeds 

planted under a New Moon in May... 

 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Pat, this is downright magical....the loveliness of waking up to the smell of baking in the kitchen, the starry night, the song of a meadowlark.....such intricate imagery and I loved imagining it all. I hope May is a better month for all of us! Great poem. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Lydia... I love Artichoke hearts dipped in butter and I also adore rhubarb with apples in a pie.. read more



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"under a new moon in May" ... ohhhhhhhh how lively to read .. so Romantic ... dreamy, delicious, extravagant in colors and tastes .. so glad to have this experience this morning, Pat! thanks so much for sharing
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest E... I will always remember going to College in Napa Valley at age 19 where steamed Artichok.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

what warm memories Pat! how fortunate we are for them eh!? blessings my friend!
What a heavenly way to greet the morning. I can imagine a child in bed waking to the baking in the kitchen. Home made from home produced. Rhubarb, apples and artichokes. Yummy says I. The smell of baking, takes me way back in time. People just don't bake as much now so you don't catch those delicious smells wafting your way, especially first thing in the morning. I love these words Pat. You paint such wonderful imagery in your lines and tantalise the senses. My best wishes winging their way across the pond dear poet.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Chris... you seem so close by when I read your words... wrapped up in Grandma’s Quilt by a.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

trying to say... having a Cuppa tea with you... dear Christine...
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

A cuppa tea with you dear Pat would be divine. I am raising my cup to you now :))
hi Patricia, I see you have been playing in dirt again, making your garden grow with goodies and treating us with the harvest of your efforts.... wonderful poetry here and I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing a piece of that apple/rhubarb pie...

I planted tomatos and peppers, broccoli and cucumbers but we had two days of frost and everything has died.... so it's back to getting new plants and starting again... the kale and the new rose bush did well though so I am happy about this... anyway as it is not quite May, I have time to recover...

so, as you can tell I love playing in dirt as well...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Curt... planting is what Spring is all about... something deeper with Roots that will nourish u.. read more
Romantic anticipations in the air, dances with fanfare, lovers that love to dare, wafting smells to spare. Wow to all for poetry and its effect...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Sami.. thanks for joining the Celebration of Spring where the atmosphere is alive with sunsh.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

All wonderful. You are welcome....
Pat, this is downright magical....the loveliness of waking up to the smell of baking in the kitchen, the starry night, the song of a meadowlark.....such intricate imagery and I loved imagining it all. I hope May is a better month for all of us! Great poem. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Lydia... I love Artichoke hearts dipped in butter and I also adore rhubarb with apples in a pie.. read more
dear folks... Dreams prepare your day for adventures...
whether working in your garden or baking in your kitchen...
preparing a romantic dinner where Dreams come true.
the Author... Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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