Time Stood Still

Time Stood Still

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

All the flowers bloom 

when you walk into a room 

Your smile holds my breath 

The earth quakes beneath my feet 

I am forever entwined. 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Oh dear Pat, this little piece of brevity is a knock out. It says so much about the love you have for your dearest. You are still truly smitten after all these years. Entwined you are forever. Beautiful and heartwarming to read. May you have many, many days of happiness together.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Chris... I discovered Roger in 1987 at a Country Western dance at Bronco Billy's when our Of.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

I love this romantic account of how you two lovebirds met. You are truly blessed x
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Thank you Chris... many "tumbleweeds" have crossed our path; however, we seem to believe in destiny .. read more



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Reading this feels like breath of fresh air.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Days Ago

dearest Cassie... your review is like being at the seaside and listening to the sound of seagulls as.. read more
A little room turned to a lovely divine garden where lovers sing and dance in happiness.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Zainul ... yes, it was like a
Butterfly 🦋 landed on my shoulder.
Thank you .. read more
zainul

1 Month Ago

I really enjoy the pure romantic relationships of women and men.Enjoy the divine relationship,Pat... read more
what a lovely expression of love dear Patricia I am a bit jealous of that feeling that you penned so nicely! I am I fear destined to only stir quakes on the paper once in a blue moon:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Bunny... looking back and realizing how poetry can "Seal" a pledge "to your own self be true.. read more
Ah..there is nothing a beautiful smile, and it is noticed immediately. This Brevity poem puts a real punch into a few lines and lets the reader know through vivid images how much love one can have. I love it, and I enjoy writing these myself. Excellent!!! Fondly, Betty

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Betty... must read your poetry... this is my first try using a Tanka... it simply flowed like a.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

I love it!
Very beautiful poem, sounds like something between a newly wed couple or an elderly couple. Great stuff!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear JungLee... thanks for a charming review. gently, Pat
Oh dear Pat, this little piece of brevity is a knock out. It says so much about the love you have for your dearest. You are still truly smitten after all these years. Entwined you are forever. Beautiful and heartwarming to read. May you have many, many days of happiness together.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Chris... I discovered Roger in 1987 at a Country Western dance at Bronco Billy's when our Of.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

I love this romantic account of how you two lovebirds met. You are truly blessed x
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Thank you Chris... many "tumbleweeds" have crossed our path; however, we seem to believe in destiny .. read more

if this little micro could be a gem, it would be a bloomin big diamond....

Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Neville... you shine like delicious Carets to this Bunny. Thanks for the Glow... Pat
Neville

1 Month Ago


warmly welcome and with a little squeeze of fondness for good measure :)
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Neville... your review left me with a melancholy mood as the day rolled by on sunbeam shadows. .. read more
This is beautiful Patricia
I know too well how this feels like ?
You have that one person - that makes the entire world move into -
the background
People speak to you and you hear nothing
Loving someone is a gift !


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Serene.. people are the Orchestra that played the Nocturnal melodies under the Stars.. thank.. read more
The poetess is thoroughly smitten; portraying that overwhelming attraction, elegantly.
Nicely done, Patricia!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Thank you Jimmy... I couldn’t ask for a more realistic review. Roger and I were smitten at first.. read more
Ultra romantic!
Beautiful poem Patricia.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Ana... I adore your review. Romantic rendezvous are always in style... wishing you love and fl.. read more

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Patricia Wedel

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 16 and Madeline age 12; also Shannah age 7 and sister Kahless age 5; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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