Sun Rose with Petals soft

Sun Rose with Petals soft

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

There are mornings when the scent of Roses 

rises and becomes the passion for creativity... 

A tonic that lingers on the garden path where 

Butterflies flutter and Sparrows sing of Spring... 

The Roses reflect the Sun and leave an edge of 

golden trim around each perfect petal as they 

wait patiently to be picked for a bouquet... 

Shades of Yellow and Peach with lavender close by...   

A lovely Bride will carry an arrangement down the aisle.  

The Church Steeple will ring with Blue Bells that grew 

where love blossomed into a beautiful, "I do".  

As the Lohengrin wedding march played on a piano 

the Eaves of the Cathedral fluttered with Mourning Doves 

as the Reverent said... "I pronounce you man and wife... 

You may Kiss the Bride".  

  

 

  

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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I could smell the roses as I read each line Pat. What a wonderful journey your pen took with this, as I read at the kitchen window, Sunday morn, birds singing and sun shining.
I want to go out into the garden now and smell the flowers. No roses here though, so I'll just take your words with me 😀

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear Lorry... you are a Sweetheart... flowers are very healing and gardens with birdsong... Bless yo.. read more
what a beautiful description of love walking down the aisle to greet its partner, and say "I do"---
and meanwhile the roses bloom in agreement and sanction the event.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Jacob... lovely to have you as a guest
as we celebrate the love of two Swallows from.. read more
This poem, your personal photos, & the pure awesomeness of your share (below) . . . all come together to make this a very enjoyable experience. You walk us thru the sights & smells & feelings so we become immersed. It feels like you might be on a nostalgia bender, as I've been lately! *wink! wink!* I love the way your poem doesn't start out with the wedding details, but rather eases into this sacred scene from a more ephemeral state of mind. Great details & strong tie-in going from flowers in the garden to flowers for the wedding party. Thank you for sharing what's uppermost in your heart (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Margie... our Sky today is so baby blue with pillows of white fluffy Duck Down... where Ange.. read more
This is so beautiful, Pat.
Your words match their beautiful love so wonderfully.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Ana... so lovely to share your feelings... flowers and Canterbury tales
keep us smil.. read more
Awwww...June weddings. The romantic magical stuff summer is made of! Edie and JD were such a beautiful couple....and they still are. Gentle and soft like rose petals are your words.....just so lovely. LydI**

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Lydi... today is the first day of Summer and a gentle breeze is like a billion sighs of sunn.. read more
What a wonderful poem of wedding bliss. We can only wish the greatest happiness for the bride and groom as they begin their lives together as one. Lovely. F.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear Fabian... thank you for your kind blessings. The young people work very hard to keep up with t.. read more
its a sweet memory you have shared Pat ... great pics .. your son at 3 has a distinct look of determination says i ;) a rose is a rose is a rose ...is not necessarily true is it ... there are roses ...and then there are ROSES! :))))))))) thanks for sharing this very personal poem and very important event in your life .. stay well .. be well !

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest E... The Rockies may tumble... Gibraltar May crumble ... but Love is here to stay... not jus.. read more

soooo bloomin romantic and filled with an abundance of laughter n love.. with hues more delicate than a wheatears cheek pon a pastel picture perfect....

Neville :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 16 and Madeline age 12; also Shannah age 7 and sister Kahless age 5; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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