Romancing the Clouds

Romancing the Clouds

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Formations of romantic moments...

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When clouds lie in billows of 

ancient romantic adventures

I seem to remember tender sighs... 

I smile as little storm clouds lie under 

our feathered rendezvous of love as 

lightening strikes and thunder rolls 

we behold the dreams of a thousand 

Arabian nights... 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Such a contrast here dear Pat between the imagery of pure white, billowing clouds journeying through the sky., forming mountains and continents and the sensual thoughts of Arabian nights. Reminded me a book I read many moons ago and the richness and colour of the latter as well as the sensual and exotic oils and spices that spring to mind. You certainly know how to make a poetic mind wander. Wishing you a happy Thursday my friend.

Chris

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Chris... your review flows like a river that goes around bends and through valleys. I appre.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you dear Pat and may you have a peaceful day too. Warmest wishes from across the pond :)



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A love that always has been and always will be, as consistent as the weather (there will always be weather after all and clouds and thunder). "Feathered rendevouz of love", it brings us up among the clouds and thunder and lightning. Let us both have a thousand more tender sighs.

Read your profile, "a man of letters" means something decidedly different in Latin. "Homo tres literorum" refers to a thief. But perhaps he stole your heart.

Posted 1 Day Ago


wonderful analogy - so light and delightfully fluffy. this certainly ushers in feelings. you took me away floating. ending really opens up possibilities just like romance. very enjoyable piece of verse, as well it should. you write really well with deep, beautiful feeling ... :)

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Patricia Wedel

1 Day Ago

dear Pete... I appreciate your words that resonate through storms and weathered moments. The lighte.. read more
Ah, romantic moments forming from stormy skies. Reminds me of Laughter in the Rain by Neil Sedaka.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Weeks Ago

dear Fabian.. so Cool this poem reminded you of “Laughter in the Rain” by Neil Sedaka... my Pen .. read more
Tender, kind and sweet words written dear Pat. I read a few time. You need to write a book. Your words, hopeful, needed and wonderful.
Coyote

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Patricia Wedel

3 Weeks Ago

dearest John... it seems that dreams are really bookmarks between Chapters in our Life. So many sto.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

I agree dear Pat. In my dreams. I write story and if I remember. I write down.
Patricia Wedel

3 Weeks Ago

John... you should definitely write a Novel “Romance and the Dance” ... thank you for your Confi.. read more
Pat, this is such a rich and exotic romp through space, yet.. has true dreamy sentiments.. Your poetry always sends me off and away into the kind of world which means more than clatter, rock and roll. Alongside you the adventures are played to gentle music.. Thank you dear oetal.. ..

(My resident feathered friends are causing such a racket.. my oldest dog sleeps with his paws over his ears.. truly!)

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Em... love the exotic romp through space ... covering my eyes with my paws as lightening str.. read more
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

It's always a tt reat to re ad your posts and respn ses, Pat. Often co me back to this or tha.. read more

so gentle and perfect .. who could pass this way and not gaze skyward .. even those lightening strikes are sheathed in silk and satin...

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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dearest Neville... I love to rhyme with your words... suffice it to say... the Milky Way is paved in.. read more
Neville

1 Month Ago


welcome Pat and true :)
This one really hits home with me. Living in Cali all my life (where there are not many clouds, even in winter!) most of my romantic venturings included a total fascination with WEATHER (mainly in the form of clouds). Taking romantic forays here & there, the weather & the sky & the very clouds themselves were woven into my visceral response to each memory. I have seen so little rain, so little thunder & lightning, these aspects dominate the way I remember places I've gone on my various adventures. I love the way the romantic & sensual flashbacks are interspersed with lines depicting weather, as if it's all connected, which it is! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

You are the Poet Laureate of the Cliffs of beautiful gifts... Inleft my heart in San Francisco in 19.. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Love that song . . . love napa & sonoma valleys . . . did alot of wine tasting there, back in the da.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Yes... I was fortunate to be there when times were more Innocent and pure.
Hope you will be.. read more
Currently, our billowing clouds are less appealing with rebellious raindrops recklessly ranging cross turmoiled treetops but if they transport us to soft Arabia nights we will contact 'Rent a Camel' and quickly depart on a lightning strike.
I believe there is an unlimited mileage special on at present!
A wonderful adventure Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

p.s. I love rebellious and reckless
Raindrops. I would love to write a poem about those ve.. read more
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

They are currently creating caustic confusion clanking and clattering rooftop
I will wait for.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

I will try to pen a colorful poem with the help from James Dean the movie Icon who passed. Our Spir.. read more
Sigh. I love this.
Romance and adventure....
Two of my favorite things.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Thank you Allie.. clouds are made for lovers like you. dearly, Pat
Allie Brumfield

1 Month Ago

Thank you..x
thunder storms are beautiful

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Wordman.. thunder storms are a mystery to me... but they are quite artistic with white jagged l.. read more
 wordman

1 Month Ago

well you painted it well,lol i see it almost everyday

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