October Octave Sunsets Pumpkin Pink and Orange

October Octave Sunsets Pumpkin Pink and Orange

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Scarecrows beside a split-rail fence... looking for goblins and such

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As the Autumn Sun becomes bright and evening breezes sing 

I hear the music of the Angels who guard our every move...  

Cedar Waxwings are sitting in the Crabapple trees munching 

on the berries as they wait for the weathering storms... 

Seed Seekers visit the feeder as they chirp and chatter with 

tales of Wood Meadow Sage...  

Bluejays plump from Summer's berries on bittersweet vines 

visit our porch and deck feeder for a quick snack and then off to 

discover the other gourmet locations to keep in mind when 

grey clouds and snow descend from the North... 

Tufted Titmice need a safe place to land as they wait for 

their turn to feed where a Peck at a time will suffice when 

Winter brings Ice and Snow on frozen ponds where children skate to 

the song of the Whippoorwill and the sounds of the Downy Woodpecker... 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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...................... My word our Pat .... what a wonderful picture you paint here .. and for us to flock to see ... You seem to have a magnificent variety of feathered visitors .. A sight to behold .. an ornithologist and poets paradise .. How lucky some of us are ................................ x

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Neville... I love Autumn when colors of leaves and birds are embroidered on my heart with s.. read more
Neville

3 Years Ago


I love autumn too Pat ... and you paint it so well ...



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Such a beautiful
poem of nature
the fine feathered
friends in all their
glory. sing the song
of autumn.s. vivid
colors .and atmosphere

a lovely descriptive
poem so well penned;

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Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Fran... the birds seem to know the our world is in disarray. It ia so comforting to see the.. read more
So detailed poetry you wrote. I was captivated by this reading. I never heard of a Crabapple tree. I looked it up, from what I saw so far it's not actually an apple? Thank you for educating me as well as entertaining me with your words. Wonderful poem, Patricia. It took me away. :)

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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Cyperion... I have to chuckle a bit and say... sometimes we may be crabapples although we are n.. read more
Vivid description of bird life in Autumn, and when winter approaches a few will dare to pick on anything around.lovely poem and you sure know your birds ! Fondly, Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Betty... thanks for stopping by... it seems that birds have a plan for every season. There .. read more
The days of Winter. The birds do know when to escape South. I liked the description in your words. Nature, a life of it own. Wonderful to see dear Pat. Thank for sharing the amazing poem.
Coyote

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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest John... as if Nature spread your magic wand the atmosphere in colored in magenta and gold as.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Good morning dear Pat and you are welcome.
I think I just got a glorious peek out your window and saw the goings on of birds and weather. I do the same thing and am always mesmerized by what I see. Robins hop around, pecking at the grass while blue jays behave badly. Sometimes a cardinal passes by, or tiny sparrows. All summer, I kept the hummingbirds in fresh nectar. Perhaps I kept them happy, for they finally just left the other day. (Oct. 4) Lucky you, being visited by woodpeckers.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Samuel... lovely to hear from you. The birds are my social network as if I were doing "need.. read more
I know you love the featheries & your poem is a loving tribute to their autumn gorging celebration, but at this moment I'm a little put out at the birdies for decimating my garden with their fierce foraging. Having so many wild trees & bushes that offer an abundance of berries this time of year, why must the birds peck my romaine to shreds? Well, at least they leave my strawberries alone! What's wrong with my lazy dogs -- they won't defend my garden from this swooping doom? Well, let me escape my troubles for a bit & just dwell in your poetic fantasy where the featheries are content to peck a passel of wild snacks. Great throbbing variety of sparkling detail, depicting how the bird community as a whole teems as if at an endless smorgasbord! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

I have never seen an Angel until I knew you... I will be your first glimpse of a Cardinal... gently,.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Awww! I'm touched! I forgot to mention that the title of your poem beckons like a breeze. It rolls o.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

I appreciate this... 💕 lovely to spend my silver years with poetry... a blessing in spite of this.. read more
'.. Seed Seekers visit the feeder as they chirp and chatter with tales of Wood Meadow Sage... Bluejays plump from Summer's berries on bittersweet vines .. visit our porch and deck feeder for a quick snack and then .. '

Your poems inevitably bring St. Francis of Assisi to mind, petal mine! Your pocket of our oft grey world seems full of beautiful flittery fluttery creatures! What a magical place you've created and obviously, love to pieces. Thank you so much for sharing. Hope you and Rograre taking care, keeping safe and all. xx.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

You are a “Care” package flying across the Pond where deep sapphire blue dreams are prayers of d.. read more
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

You make such a beautiful couple... smiling here. Wonderful thoughts deep sapphire blue dreams.. as .. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

By the way, Em... I have long admired St. Francis of Assis.... I had a Mentor who was so much like S.. read more
Beautiful................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Light... thank you for your Midas touch upon my
humble poem. Birds are so inspiring to.. read more
I'd say UR very lucky to have all these overwinter
They mostly leave us, but because of COVID they will be replaced this year by flocks of snowbirds that will be coming to overwinter on Vancouver Island instead of going south as they usually do

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Dave... I think of Anne Murray singing
“Snow Bird”.. an incredible song of warmth a.. read more
This is such beautiful poetry and makes us envision such a beautiful picture! I love the mention of all the birds, but my favorite part was the mention of the gray clouds coming from the north. That was just a very beautiful thing to add in and your writing makes me very excited for fall!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Cola Cat... your feelings of enchantment shine through the dark clouds and grey skies. Thanks .. read more
Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

It was my pleasure, really! (:

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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