Lemon Meringue Tart

Lemon Meringue Tart

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

My estranged heart has been crowned with 

whipped clouds where songs are hummed in 

murmurring moments when you appear with 

your usual extraordinary Smile and Sea green eyes  

so deeply framed in Blue... 

I knew that it was only a matter of time when 

my heart would melt and the Sun would go down... 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Sea green eyes with blue. Captivating, mesmerising and with smiles too. That lemon meringue tart with its whipped clouds sounds very tempting. Shall we have a large slice with an English cuppa Pat, and sit and talk it over in your garden. Love this poem.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Months Ago

dearest Chris... lemon meringue tart by the garden gate ... heaven can wait... I have a special “.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Months Ago

Dear Pat I have returned to read you again. I have been looking for a new poetic feast from your pen.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Chris... you have inspired me... and I thank you ever so much. After having a lot of rain, .. read more



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Green is the rarest color of eyes and it seems to be possessed by some of the rarest and most special people; certainly those I have encountered in my own life, including my wife and my father. I enjoyed this poem. Lovely write. F.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Fabian... lovely to read your review so early in Thanksgiving morning on the east coast of t.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

3 Months Ago

We celebrated Thanksgiving over a week ago. And it was a great meal too. Just sitting home today whi.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Yes.. every day we count our blessings for friends and family and food on the Table.. “Faith, Hope.. read more
Very moving and the use of metaphors are unique in a way of putting you someplace where you can relate how heart are maudlin organism that can completely put you in a trance. In the line " My estranged heart has been crowned with
whipped clouds where songs are hummed in." Simply put and beautifully penned. Keep writing sincerely your friend in life and poetry :)


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Thank you Andrew Nelson... I am a novice and writing what comes naturally. I appreciate your review.. read more
My mum made a yummy lemon meringue pie, still can see it, the softness of the meringue and that delicious lemon taste. You write truly of love Pat.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Andrew... my Mother also made the most delicious and beautiful lemon meringue pies. She was.. read more
Nature frames our lives know wonder it stirs us and leads us, this is delightfully romantic and sensual. So very lovely.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Thank you Cherrie for your lovely review...
it is a beautiful time of the year ... rain one .. read more
A wonderful poem shared dear Pat. I liked the photo and hopeful feel of the words. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

John dear ... 💕 lovely to read your words... my muse and I become entangled in the romance that d.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Hello dear Pat and I loved the poem.
A lovely, descriptive romantic piece of pie I see here before me. I simply adore lemon meringue, could eat loads and 'love' doing so!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear John... there are days when we need a soothing touch of lemon to navigate the by-ways of highwa.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Sorry John... it is not a curse, but gives us direction at a Cross-Roads. Be blessed and Happy Than.. read more


...........this is poetically delicious dear Pat and got a smile stamped write the way through ..
decidedly gently n true
... Neville :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

My dear Neville... a tart of lemon merinque can
bring a smile to the saddest day... may your.. read more
Neville

3 Months Ago


and back at you Pat and truly ...
:)
oh my goodness .. beautiful ... masterful poetry says i! such a poetic treat to read and experience .. my heart sighs ........... love it Patricia! top of the line!
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

He is from "The Hobbit" or one of the Trilogy .. i was instantly enchanted by him and his bride..the.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Interesting Gene... years ago, Roger and I took turns reading a Hobbit Book to each other. Now that.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

yes it is .. great story .. mighty fine writing .. my kids all read them all .. several times.
If only see green eyes surrounded by blue could fall upon one as lovely as you. If only that gaze could create the days so perfect and true. If only...

It moved me, good write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest T.S. to be moved is quite like the sea green ocean waves that caress the gentle thoughts wi.. read more
Love is found in such delicious thoughts and picturesque moments, never forgotten, always held close to one's heart. Gentle thought, fine words, dear Petal.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Months Ago

dearest Em... lovely morning here where an Autumn day will have a Chill... but my favorite Cardinals.. read more
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

' ... we will share our hopes for the future in waves across the Pond.. ' We certainly will, dear la.. read more

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 17 and Madeline age 13; also Shannah age 8 and sister Kahless age 6; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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