Lemon Meringue Tart

Lemon Meringue Tart

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

My estranged heart has been crowned with 

whipped clouds where songs are hummed in 

murmurring moments when you appear with 

your usual extraordinary Smile and Sea green eyes  

so deeply framed in Blue... 

I knew that it was only a matter of time when 

my heart would melt and the Sun would go down... 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Sea green eyes with blue. Captivating, mesmerising and with smiles too. That lemon meringue tart with its whipped clouds sounds very tempting. Shall we have a large slice with an English cuppa Pat, and sit and talk it over in your garden. Love this poem.

Chris

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Weeks Ago

dearest Chris... lemon meringue tart by the garden gate ... heaven can wait... I have a special “.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

4 Days Ago

Dear Pat I have returned to read you again. I have been looking for a new poetic feast from your pen.. read more
Patricia Wedel

4 Days Ago

dearest Chris... you have inspired me... and I thank you ever so much. After having a lot of rain, .. read more



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Very moving and the use of metaphors are unique in a way of putting you someplace where you can relate how heart are maudlin organism that can completely put you in a trance. In the line " My estranged heart has been crowned with
whipped clouds where songs are hummed in." Simply put and beautifully penned. Keep writing sincerely your friend in life and poetry :)


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Thank you Andrew Nelson... I am a novice and writing what comes naturally. I appreciate your review.. read more
My mum made a yummy lemon meringue pie, still can see it, the softness of the meringue and that delicious lemon taste. You write truly of love Pat.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

dearest Andrew... my Mother also made the most delicious and beautiful lemon meringue pies. She was.. read more
Nature frames our lives know wonder it stirs us and leads us, this is delightfully romantic and sensual. So very lovely.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Thank you Cherrie for your lovely review...
it is a beautiful time of the year ... rain one .. read more
A wonderful poem shared dear Pat. I liked the photo and hopeful feel of the words. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

John dear ... 💕 lovely to read your words... my muse and I become entangled in the romance that d.. read more
A lovely, descriptive romantic piece of pie I see here before me. I simply adore lemon meringue, could eat loads and 'love' doing so!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dear John... there are days when we need a soothing touch of lemon to navigate the by-ways of highwa.. read more


...........this is poetically delicious dear Pat and got a smile stamped write the way through ..
decidedly gently n true
... Neville :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

My dear Neville... a tart of lemon merinque can
bring a smile to the saddest day... may your.. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


and back at you Pat and truly ...
:)
oh my goodness .. beautiful ... masterful poetry says i! such a poetic treat to read and experience .. my heart sighs ........... love it Patricia! top of the line!
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dearest Gene... when blue green eyes capture a smile... the world becomes a voyage of stormy nights .. read more
If only see green eyes surrounded by blue could fall upon one as lovely as you. If only that gaze could create the days so perfect and true. If only...

It moved me, good write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dearest T.S. to be moved is quite like the sea green ocean waves that caress the gentle thoughts wi.. read more
Love is found in such delicious thoughts and picturesque moments, never forgotten, always held close to one's heart. Gentle thought, fine words, dear Petal.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

dearest Em... lovely morning here where an Autumn day will have a Chill... but my favorite Cardinals.. read more
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

' ... we will share our hopes for the future in waves across the Pond.. ' We certainly will, dear la.. read more
smiles and eyes
so captivating
melting into
a sunset .
sounds like a
delicious tart
indeed..beautiful
descriptivex makes
this a delightful read
with your astounding
poetic verse..love it

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Weeks Ago

dearest Fran Marie... love can be seen in
smiling eyes and delicious clouds of whipped cream.. read more

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