Persuasion

Persuasion

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Pleasures in Summer 

being seduced by Thunder 

I rest my Wonder... 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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You nailed this Pat. I have a picture in my head of a scene of nature that just stops you in your tracks, thought, speech or being in the middle of something that stopped being important and just watched the spectacle of nature in silent wonder. No need for thoughts to interrupt, just a knowing that you have a smile on your face and truly are in the moment of being.
To fit into 17 syllables what others spend a lifetime trying to find the words is truly impressive and one day I hope to get there too 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Lorry... it has taken me years to realize that Thunder is the best answer to the secret of pass.. read more



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Dear Pat, I am happy to return here and leave my heartprint as well as my footprint. I am so pleased you too are captivated by the power of Haiku. So few syllables can create such a lasting impact. This site has been playing up again so I do hope you can see both my initial response and this one too. Sending you love across the waves on a blue sky morning.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

In the middle of a pandemic when such things become a priority, you know the plot is lost. Money sho.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Chris.. we have always had a struggle with good and evil.. we will not cease to pray... Prayer .. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Amen dear Pat...
Storms do have a habit of blotting out the light of the sun so they can try to impress with their fork lightning and sheet flashing fireworks. I always prefer the air when it is sweet after they have left and rolled on elsewhere. Have a lovely day Pat.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Chris... I agree... the Air is sweet after a Storm... last evening, the day had been overcast w.. read more
Thunder can be very seducing allowing thoughts to dream away and being caught up in the moment of simply listening to the deep rumbling outside. Oh the power of a storm

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Beauty... the depth of your perception is romantically persuaded when thunder and lightening s.. read more
Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. Storms speak to me and I love to watch them.
OH my, Petal.. seems the season is seasoning your poetry!
That said, reading again.. this is briefly but wholly academic! Clever!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Em... you give me that feathery feeling...
as if I could spread my wings over pastures .. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

You could and can, dear friend.. enjoy!!!! :)

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Added on May 4, 2021
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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..

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