When Snow melts in the Mountains

When Snow melts in the Mountains

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Freshwater streams feed into Rivers...

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Love flows like streams down a Mountain Ravine... 
entwining among wildflowers of Lady Slippers and 
Jack in the Pulpits.... where Mountain Laurel gathers... 
Mourning Doves woo their lover under the cover of 
the Crescent Moon... returning to the western sky 
after sunset appearing with Evening Star Venus... 
Venus is named after the Roman Goddess of love and beauty... 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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Dearest Pat, your words flow like a mountain stream, vivid imagery to show how loves flows as well... bringing in the fauna and flora as you always do to make it read so beautifully. I love mourning doves, especially under the crescent moon...so soothing and calming...
Hope this finds you well,
Yours truly,
B.




Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Betty… the Tributaries of our Heart
merge into a River where peaceful feelings ebb.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

You be well too !💥



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This so beautifully penned like a painting
exhibiting vibrant hues of nature in all her
glory lively images enhanced by your refined
descriptions ..you are one with the sound
of nature..so nicely penned

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is a beautiful stellar write. The end took me to the sky and beyond. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Cyprian… you have the touch of violin music 🎼 when you speak… the Angels fly above with .. read more
Filled with beauty and magic. You leave us speechless and mesmerized. Enjoyed your poem as you enjoy your wonderful surroundings. Happy 4th. to you and yours. God bless America.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Sami… it is true… we love our Flag and our Country… only divine intervention will be k.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Wow! You are welcome. Peace, love and harmony.
A wonderful poem as always
Sometimes things go somewhat less pleasantly as currently we are involved in a record breaking heat wave and that melting snow has become a raging torrent

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Dave… you are very kind… thanks so much for reading my musings. It seems we are living .. read more
You write well, there's a good beat to your writing. I really like how you closed it out.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear david.. I am pleased you enjoyed the beat of my poetry. I am drawn to the Moon with all its M.. read more
Ohhh I love this poem, such beautiful easy and enchanting flow with each word. Wonderful imaginary and greatly written. I truly enjoy it Patricia :-)
A huge well done from me!!!
Stay safe

Sil
:-)))


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Silmara… thanks.. I have walked on the mountain side in the Shenandoah Valley where in the Sp.. read more
Silmara McGarry

2 Months Ago

Wonderful!
You are most welcome dear :-)
an all encompassing scene Pat! a pleasant place in the mind!
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Gene… I imagine you have mountain streams in the Ozarks… where mourning doves bathe in t.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

your a darlin' Pat!
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Thanks Gene… we need to be like flowers and get a little Sun and lots of shade and lemonade under.. read more
A wonderful poem shared dear Pat. To be able to watch the stars and feel the spirit of nature close. Paradise. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear John… as the Moon rises… so does our Spirit in colors of love and devotion. It is lovely t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

So far a good Summer dear Pat. I hope you are doing well and having some fun. This year I will seek .. read more
your poetry makes love a river that runs in a beautiful version down a mountain.
too often love just tumbles downhill on very dry land (feelings)
when the flow is stopped up by flotsam....
Your poetry could make curmudgeons smile.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear Jacob… you could draw a hilarious Cartoon with your Words. I can only imagine a Curmudgeon s.. read more
Dearest Pat, your words flow like a mountain stream, vivid imagery to show how loves flows as well... bringing in the fauna and flora as you always do to make it read so beautifully. I love mourning doves, especially under the crescent moon...so soothing and calming...
Hope this finds you well,
Yours truly,
B.




Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Betty… the Tributaries of our Heart
merge into a River where peaceful feelings ebb.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

You be well too !💥

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