Autumn Rufous Hummingbird

Autumn Rufous Hummingbird

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Shades of Sunsets fly on wayward winds...

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My Heart becomes a Haven for Hummers as 

colors of Autumn leaves flutter in October mist... 

I long for the scented Kiss of your tender Lips 

when flowers lingered in the shadow of the Moon...  

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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The HARVEST MOON is almost upon us! It's been shining in thru my wall of windows all night long the last few nights! Yippee! I'm already catching the humming magic . . . the hummingbirds have been feisty, they come right up to my face to say "hi" as I'm watering my garden! We seem to be having an early autumn & hopefully this translates into early rains becuz we sooooo need it! Thanks for fluttering all the way around autumn & spreading your contagious joy (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Margie... so many changes in the Moon... and now we have a Full Moon... resonating the Magic.. read more
barleygirl

2 Months Ago

I would venture to say that the full moon gets you REVVED UP . . . just like it does me! My mind rac.. read more



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Nice, so very nice. The use of visuals here were wonderful, and the thoughts were touching.

Posted 5 Days Ago


So beautiful dear Pat. You made the words dance to perfect and meaningful poetry. I love the Hummingbird. I have seen none in my part of Michigan this year. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


oh my ... how romantic and stunning in it's simplicity and your love of nature .. never would have connected a hummer with a kiss but it is perfect ... they approach with such delicate caution and tenderness .. taking small kisses many times .. love it! we should be like hummingbirds ;) Beauregard woke me up around 2 AM wanting out and that moon is as full as can be ... throwing shadows and cloud shadows sailing across her glorious light ... love this poem .. it's a gem says i!
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Gene... yes, the Moon is full and proud to have been through many phases. We now live in a .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

oh ... yes! God the Creator of all things displays His majesty and plan in all we see .. it astounds.. read more
Awhh yes the hues of autumn
are lively and lovely making glad
our hearts ..as the tress display
a picturesque collage of colors
as the humming birds hum along in
sweet harmony

nicely done verse

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Fran... so lovely to touch feelings through the seasons. Autumn colors fly like butterflies.. read more
  Fran Marie

2 Months Ago

Always good to read you Dear Pat;
This is a wonderful, beautiful write

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

Thank you Kerra... may you find solace and smiles as Autumn turns the world into a Kaleidoscope of .. read more
I absolutely love the sounds of fluttering hummingbird wings. I can hear them at times dancing outside my bedroom window and it's just so magical. This is a glorious homage to those lovely flighty little creatures. Thank you Patricia for this artful little poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Carlos... we need the flutter of hummingbird wings in order to sing with Natures symphony al.. read more
Soft, hushed words of a spectacular season which brings love to the fore. As the hummer kisses a plant, so the humans embrace in the October mist.
Nice Pat!
Best
Betty

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Betty... lovely to read your words... as some Birds are headed South to share the Magic of b.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome Pat, ditto for you!!
Oh my!! dear Pat!! since first line You immediately took my breath and heart away!! gorgeous, so gorgeous... heavenly... a language not only to be read but to be felt by heart, this is how true Romance should be, spiritual, tender, a breathtaking blessing... warm, so warm... that it swells the heart with tears of its overwhelmed warmth. Thank You for sharing such a blissful experience.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Light... I can only think of how so many Immigrants only have the Sky and Trees for Shelter... read more
The HARVEST MOON is almost upon us! It's been shining in thru my wall of windows all night long the last few nights! Yippee! I'm already catching the humming magic . . . the hummingbirds have been feisty, they come right up to my face to say "hi" as I'm watering my garden! We seem to be having an early autumn & hopefully this translates into early rains becuz we sooooo need it! Thanks for fluttering all the way around autumn & spreading your contagious joy (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dearest Margie... so many changes in the Moon... and now we have a Full Moon... resonating the Magic.. read more
barleygirl

2 Months Ago

I would venture to say that the full moon gets you REVVED UP . . . just like it does me! My mind rac.. read more
Now that the Moon has become forlorn... we linger in the
shadows of green pastures where flowers once bloomed...
and Hummers sipped nectar until the night became a bed of
dreams where lovers slept and angels wept... gently, the Author Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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