Townsend Warblers where flowers rest

Townsend Warblers where flowers rest

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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sweet sweet sweet

"
High on a mountain where clouds rest 

in blue skies of peppermint sighs... 

there is a Nest of Butterflies... 

Yellow Warblers with licorice stripes 

sing sweet sweet sweet all day long... 

Living West of the Rockies in San Francisco 

they often visit our friend Margie... 

Player of Mandolins of Hearts... 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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awaaaaaaa!! "sing sweet sweet sweet all day" I wish I can sing her too "sweet sweet sweet all life" she is a blessing here so happy she got her power back, spread her wings and came back.... Thank You lovely loving Pat for this gentle kindness You've shared with us, this "sweet sweet sweet song" gonna stick in my head all day...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Light... my deepest apologies for waiting so long to thank you for your gracious Review. Ye.. read more



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I love when I can hear words within the songs of birds.
This is a wonderful poem filled with colors bright, sky warm and melody sweet.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Cherrie… it means a lot to read your review… to know that the sweet songs of birds are h.. read more
Nice, I especially like
"High on a mountain where clouds rest
in blue skies of peppermint sighs..."
Very visual to my mind. --- Thanks for a restful and enjoyable read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Falcon.. writing a poem is a song that may soothe a restless Soul who needs to hum a melody tha.. read more
JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Descended from a Scotch-Irish grandfather, I understand.
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Beautiful Countryside and Castles.. with Bagpipes … love the Plaids and Kilts…
Your poems are like a lullaby, calm and relaxing Pat. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Andrew... the sweetest sounds are still to be heard... from a charming colorful Bird with Wi.. read more
“ in blue skies of peppermint sighs... ”
“ Yellow Warblers with licorice stripes ”
The well-play of color imagery is absolutely beautiful! The poem is just so heartwarming and written with a jubilant essence that tingles the reader. I also adore the meticulous details to describe the vast scenery! Breathtaking!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Dreamer... your Avatar seems to see many visions of love and mercy. I am touched by your warmt.. read more
My favorite line of this wonderful poem is "Blue skies of peppermint sighs".. I would love to hear the sweet song of yellow warblers...probably would put me to sleep... and what a nice gesture to include our friend Margie in this very sweet poem.
Thank Pat, you're always thinking of others....
I mean all of us poets!!
Best, B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Betty... we are so blessed to be a part of Poetry... where we can share our feelings. It se.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

I can go for that…we has much rain, but now beautiful in the mountains of Nc, cool, crisp and blue.. read more
Dear Pat, always a delight to read your words. A true lover of nature you are, especially our avian friends. This appreciation of Margie and her return to our fold, a gift to us all. Thank you dear poet.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Chris... so lovely to hear from you. We are knee deep in selling our Lot where our Cottage .. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

The new season has gifted some lovely warm weather Pat. Pleased to hear that following that awful fi.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Chris... it seems our lives are full of unexpected events... as the World unfolds.. read more
hi Pat, you have written a deliciously sweet sweet sweet poem.... I agree with Margie's comment on how flowers may like the feel of butterfly and bird touches... even develop their colors and petals to attract them... and on top of this sweet poem, you pay tribute to our poet friend Margie.... makes this poem a double shot of sweetness and poetic magic...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Curt... Yes, Margie is back.. after taking the sage wisdom of many of us. Thanks for you re.. read more
awaaaaaaa!! "sing sweet sweet sweet all day" I wish I can sing her too "sweet sweet sweet all life" she is a blessing here so happy she got her power back, spread her wings and came back.... Thank You lovely loving Pat for this gentle kindness You've shared with us, this "sweet sweet sweet song" gonna stick in my head all day...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Light... my deepest apologies for waiting so long to thank you for your gracious Review. Ye.. read more
We are blessed to have her and you, too. A lovely tribute and comparison to this creative lady. She must have touched you in many ways.
Excellent...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Yes, Sami... she is gifted and a pleasure to know. Thank you for having an "open" Heart. gently, P.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

She sure is. You are welcome.
Warblers in the band...
rock and roll birds...."if you're going to San Francisco, wear flowers in your hair" and sing with
the Warblers...they always like backup.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

June Carter Cash and Johnny Cash - 2002... they loved to sing the above song... I left my flowers hi.. read more

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Added on September 20, 2021
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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..

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