Bluebird Rose of Sharon

Bluebird Rose of Sharon

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Lilly of the Valley

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As we wander in the Valley among the sunbeams 

we hear the Meadow Lark's Song of Solomon...  

wanting to soar above on clouds of Glory 

where Angels abide on Cherubim wings ... 

As we gather by the River where Flowers grow 

in Rows of everlasting love and understanding... 

There'll be a touch of Heather in the Bye and Bye 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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Becuz your title "Rose of Sharon" brings to mind the old Steinbeck classic "Grapes of Wrath" . . . where Rose of Sharon loses her infant, but feeds a starving man with her breast milk at the end . . . for me, your poem takes on tones of how, in a balanced world, we would all happily nourish each other. Your poetry nourishes those who are steeped in hard times, possibly not able to imagine a bluebird or a meadow lark's song. So your poetry is like the breast milk of Rose of Sharon, feeding those who are living lives of quiet desperation, perhaps. We can never know, but in lots of ways, we do know (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Margie... sorry for the delay... I have been distracted with medical appointments... but han.. read more



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this sounds surreal and like a piece of heaven, glory be the moment!

Posted 2 Years Ago


A lovely poem full of mind producing pictures. So smooth and full of grace. --- Well said.

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely ... a touch of Heather in the sweet bye and bye. The poem filled me with peace.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Dearest Cherrie… to have a feeling of Peace
on Thanksgiving is Perfect… Blessings as w.. read more
Ever so lovely, this is a wonderful write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Kaykey.. thank you and be blessed this Thanksgiving… pardon me fir being late. tenderly, Pat.. read more
Becuz your title "Rose of Sharon" brings to mind the old Steinbeck classic "Grapes of Wrath" . . . where Rose of Sharon loses her infant, but feeds a starving man with her breast milk at the end . . . for me, your poem takes on tones of how, in a balanced world, we would all happily nourish each other. Your poetry nourishes those who are steeped in hard times, possibly not able to imagine a bluebird or a meadow lark's song. So your poetry is like the breast milk of Rose of Sharon, feeding those who are living lives of quiet desperation, perhaps. We can never know, but in lots of ways, we do know (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Margie... sorry for the delay... I have been distracted with medical appointments... but han.. read more
Wonderful and beautiful words and thoughts shared dear Pat. You allowed the reader to fall into your kind and sweet words. Thank you for sharing the poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear John... it seems as if people are coming to our Country like Rose of Sharon looking for a fert.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree. I was taught the same. Hard work bring good things to you. And it did. Hello dear Pat.
There are no words to describe this poem…it is heavenly, loved the use of Solomon and glory and it just made me so soothed and calm….you are definitely a bird expert, wish I knew the names and songs of birds as you do…flowers grow in everlasting love….wish they would love in the winter too… but they need their rest just as we do…. Thanks you dear Pat for your loving and caring poetry…..
Warm regards
B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Betty... there are many Parables and Stories that are inspirational and soothe our days of conf.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You’re very welcome, dear Pat🌸
This was a nice piece of poetry Patricia. It has the feel of an old gospel hymn. Thank you for sharing your art.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Carlos... I appreciate your review. Our family attended many Camp Meetings every Summer where .. read more

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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