Wishing on a Star

Wishing on a Star

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Of all the Stars to wish upon  

the one by far would be where you are...  

I would climb the highest Mountain and  

wait for the thunder and lightening  

to be under the spell of your smile... 

 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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I love how your celestial salsa spices up the place with your amazing imagination! What rare poet thinks like this? Thinking to connect with a missing loved one, by being beamed down on a thunderbolt? I might be tempted to pilfer your idea & write about a thunder tango since I awoke with a blank palette. I'm guessing your paints are splattering all the time in that colorful noggin' of yours! (((HUGS)))

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

Margie dear... you have encouraged me to search the Heavens and the Earth below... to dance with dan.. read more



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Oh I like that feeling! Adoring! Well done!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

dearest Patricia… my Muse must be an Angel… ❤️ love your Avatar of Roses… with a blush of .. read more
Gentle, sweet and wonderful words shared dear Pat. I agree. I would love to know the spell of true love again. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dearest John… so charming that you enjoyed this love 💗 poem… you can be smitten when a Butter.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

January is almost over. Spring will come ASAP. Hello dear Pat. Keep warm and have some fun.
Once again, simple, straight forward, and so very pleasing to read.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dear Falcon… your Avatar is perfect for your Name.. we had a Falcon on our Bird Feeder with an inj.. read more
JE Falcon

9 Months Ago

Thank you, and what a coincidence, I was married in a large Gazebo, on a lake. --- You did the right.. read more
Whoeeeee!Whoeeee! So beautiful and romantic. You must be so talented in many ways.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Months Ago

dearest Sami… my Muse is like a precious Jewel that unearths the Treasures of our Heart. You are .. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Months Ago

I do hope so. Much welcome. Enjoy those jewels.
Hi Patricia, such wonderful words you use to paint a beautiful piece of poetry. I love the content of this write. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs always....Mike.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

10 Months Ago

I shall ever miss my mother, terribly. She was the rock in my life, she was ever there for me, the l.. read more
Patricia Wedel

10 Months Ago

dearest Mike… I feel so much of my Mother abides in me.. it is a Gift to pass on… as a Pearl nec.. read more
shadrach hah

9 Months Ago

Yes Pat, our mothers are always with us, as you shall ever be looking on your dear family. Love neve.. read more
This is such a wonderful, lovely write

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

10 Months Ago

dear Kaykey... thank you for reading... my apologies for being so late. Time is fleeting, but truly.. read more
How can u not melt while reading this ! , Such heartfelt words with a touch of romance , Small words yet a splashing effect .
Love Kathy

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Kathy... yes, splashing through Oceans would be another way to search for lost love... perha.. read more
I love how your celestial salsa spices up the place with your amazing imagination! What rare poet thinks like this? Thinking to connect with a missing loved one, by being beamed down on a thunderbolt? I might be tempted to pilfer your idea & write about a thunder tango since I awoke with a blank palette. I'm guessing your paints are splattering all the time in that colorful noggin' of yours! (((HUGS)))

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

Margie dear... you have encouraged me to search the Heavens and the Earth below... to dance with dan.. read more
awa dear Pat! this warmly and tenderly touches the hearts, reminds me with the Little Prince so an extra touching there.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dear song of Light... I must become familiar with "the little prince"... still time to become "well .. read more
and the sun and the moon both approve.

j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dearest Jacob... the Sun and the Moon are always there... the light may be shadowed by storms... how.. read more

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