Wishing on a Star

Wishing on a Star

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Of all the Stars to wish upon  

the one by far would be where you are...  

I would climb the highest Mountain and  

wait for the thunder and lightening  

to be under the spell of your smile... 

 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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I love how your celestial salsa spices up the place with your amazing imagination! What rare poet thinks like this? Thinking to connect with a missing loved one, by being beamed down on a thunderbolt? I might be tempted to pilfer your idea & write about a thunder tango since I awoke with a blank palette. I'm guessing your paints are splattering all the time in that colorful noggin' of yours! (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Margie dear... you have encouraged me to search the Heavens and the Earth below... to dance with dan.. read more



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Love travels far distances, that’s for sure, and one would go anywhere to be under a star in ecstatic romance….lovely images and to the point.
Best,
B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Betty... the Spirit that lives in our Heart and Soul lives on in ways that appear in the Art.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Pat, I always appreciate yours too.
Truly, B.
a sweet declaration of love
ever so romantic ..stars are
glowing for you and your love
in this star shine write..nice

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Fran... your words are tenderly received. There is a Mysterious Aura about the Sky... with .. read more
A short sweet lovely poem that says so much despite its size. Wonderful poem Pat. Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Carlos... lovely to read your review....
there are times when a few words can encompass.. read more
Stars always remind me of our dearly departed. This is a heavenly write Pat and oozes romance. Be well my friend.


Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Chris... the intimacy of the Stars guide our days with the quiet music of the Milky Way and .. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Your responses Pat are always so poetic. You are treasure.
Aaahhh, so lovely dear Pat. So would I….

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Annette... how lovely to share your feelings... our loved ones are only a Prayer away... read more
Wowza. The romantic gesture in this poem took m y breath away.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Dale... there is a Veil in the Sky above... where Stars are wished upon... our loved ones wh.. read more
How sweetly romantic and tenderly expressed; I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Fabian... you have blessed me with your kindness... the ones we love are among the Stars and th.. read more
If we could only wish upon a Star... we would want to hear the voice
of a loved one who has flown up in the Sky where Angels rest in a
Special place where Peace and Love prevail... Amen .... the Author

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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