A Message

Though I wrote this for something different it is dedicated to all who lost lives , loved ones, homes, clothes, shoes EVERYTHING in the outbreak of recent weather in the South -Bless you all

Green Eyes
A Message
A Spell A Rebel Yell
A Whisper-

Brothers and Sisters
Don't Panic
Everything's Not Lost-

God Put A Smile Upon Your Face


Violet Hill
White Shadow
Strawberry Swing
Cemeteries of London-

We Never Change
Death Will Never Conquer-

Author's Note

All song titles of/by a great band, Coldplay- none of the words are mine just placed song titles in a way to make a bit of sense for a contest.
Also for a special person with green eyes who is in Heaven..
Miss you...

The one line .. "God put a smile upon your face leave in or take out?
Today I say leave that line in for sure.

Reviews

[Mason]

Yeah, I don't listen to Coldplay so, at first, I was like "Huuuh? o.O," but now I see.
I think it's really cool how you worked the song titles into this unique sonnet.
Leave it in. If you put it there, there's a reason, so keep it.
This special person...A sibling perhaps? a child? (the swing)
The ending "Death Will Never Conquer" sends a nice message of hope. I liked it. I will be shocked if this doesn't win first prize!

[.]

brilliantly constructed and a fantastic band..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is perfect!

[c.m.]

Keep the line there, love, it's wonderful. I don't even like Coldplay, but this poem was great. Nice work.

[Jong Schrijver]

nice poem:) i love coldplay

[ChristianM]

Great Band.
For a second I was like...
Why does this make no sense yet feel so familiar? lol
Cool Beans

[zombiikillah666]

i love this. coldplay rocks (:

[Gandré]

This was a wonderful tribute to your dear passed one, sorry about that, and to your (favorite?) group and poetically - this was a sweet melodious creation. I liked "Violet Hill
White Shadow
Strawberry Swing"----------- this was touchy..

[Art]

nice work and I agree...leave that special line in...

[Ladysue]

yes this is wonderful and I love the idea of it.... leave that line in... :)