Groove

Groove

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
"

just for fun, just for fun.. and because i love to dance.. Last year at this time the Cafe was hoppin' - Many of the 'dancers' I miss -

"
Are ya loose as a goose
loose as a goose
if you're  tight as a drum
if ya screws too tight
in your drum
hum hum hum
gonna have to loosen ya up

Come on
Can ya dance
Can ya groove
Can ya move

Say you pirouette across the floor
we'll all hum Swan Lake-

La La La La La La La La
La La
La La La La La-


Come on lady's let's groove
and you know why-

"Because it's ladies night and the
feelin's right oh yes it's ladies night
Oh, what a night'-

.......Chaka Kahn.......


Oh Good Goth
Look at them goths
they're all cryin'
like they are dyin'

Come on punks let's do it right
loosen' them right on up-

"Hey ho let's go"
"Bap bap bap bap bap bap bap bap bap
I wanna be sedated"-

Here come the metal heads
pushin there way through
all I can say is

"For those about to rock
we salute you"
"Yeaaaaah"-

Can ya dance
can ya move
can ya groove?

Let's form a line
it's Soul Train time
so let's move
groove

Look at Sue she gotsta groove
moonwalkin' right on time
now move it , move it
dance, dance

Look at DJ fresh...
Dutch Jr. yeah you
get down with ya bad self
hippin' and hoppin'
groovin' and poppin'


"I said a hip hop a
hippy to the hippy to
the hip hip the boogie da beat"

There's Devons comin'
through
come on don't clown around
or we'll play some Coldplay for you

" And I crawl back into your arms again oh
I crawl back into your arms"-

Come on in Gomer

"Surprise, surprise, surprise"

Look at True she's dancin'
in a Fragile Cricle
we best not bust her groove

"You are an angel
dance with me"-

Desert Dreamer dancin  in
dressed in colors


There's Fabian strummin' his guitar
singin songs of peace and God
let him on through

Kumbayah my Lord Kumbayah"-
 
Can ya dance
can ya move
can ya groove?

Are you loose as a goose
let's do it

Hey !
whoah zombikiiilah ridin'
a white pony
she's def tone
tone def
ya know

"Shut up and drive"-

Keep the rhythm goin'
keep the hips poppin'
stay loose as a goose
loose a goose

Come on through Jibey
we know you got the moves
come on Dale ridin' that steel horse

"I'm a cowboy on a steel horse I ride
wanted- dead or alive"-

Are you loose as a goose
are ya loose as a goose
well let's do it

 Kat, Sera, Coyote , James and  Michael
Poppy a poppin'
Craig a hoppin
A-Kid high on Floyd
 Gandre, transcending
space and time

Come on let's move to the sweet sweet groove
takin it on  home right about now

"It's gettin' hot in here, hot in here"-

Move it
move it
let's all grooooove~


As for them snobs over in the corner
letem' eat cake

"I wanna a girl in a short skirt and long black jacket"-

That's what I'm talkin bout' baby!





© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
silly stuff ! fun tho .. the thought of dancing with everyone
my Summer poem ...
"I want a girl in a short skirt and a long jacket", a song by Cake.

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Ah Chloe, this was very creative.. and such a fun to read. I like the anaphora you use in creating this piece of writing. Such dancing lines and the last line made such an easy ending, everything was moving, I almost heard music . Great work 100% rated.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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As lyrics, this is fine. As a poem, not so much. The structure is in disarray and your word choice is too colloquial. Aside from all that, nice job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the interjection of song lings and of Gomer Pyle's "surprise, surprise, surprise!" I could almost hear him saying that! A happy write that had me dancing in my seat.....good one. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Just thought I would put this up for old time sake a little bit corny but fun peace all

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the musical sound of this poem! Makes me want to dance now. Nice style and free expression of your feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful, love it, danced in my chair as I read your words, not once but twice and aloud. It's great to include folk for real and have them share what's a great theme, nothing like a dance to get you living life! The poem has its own special style, brought a smile a mile long.
Great!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like this

Posted 12 Years Ago


Had been a long while since Coyote danced in a club. My favorite place would be downtown Austin, Texas on 8th street. 80 clubs and 10,000 crazy people. Good place for a gathering of writers and poets. A very good poem. We all need to dance and find some laughter. Thank you for the fun poem to read.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wrote this last year almost the same day .. I would add many other dancers today as I have met many more nice talented people ..many X many ...


Posted 12 Years Ago


yer a trippy little thing ain't ya?
Some how I see you arm in arm with Joplin in this one.
Now that's a hang.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow you rock and every thing else!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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