Distance

Distance

A Poem by Peaceforeber
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Falling In Love With A Distance

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Distance The space between two beings that are deeply in "like" with each other
Yes. 
In like 
I say in like because we barely had the time to grow the kind of relationship
That is love 
Distance 
The miles between where I am and where you are
The miles that I count are way too far
But if I had to walk then heck I would walk
Because there is something about us is worth fighting for 
Something about us is worth having and saving No matter our distance

© 2013 Peaceforeber


Author's Note

Peaceforeber
This is my first poem her guys ;) And I hope that you like :)

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This is so Cute! lol. I really enjoyed it (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Peaceforeber

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
That distance you speak of is so familiar to me. The enemy, yet, at the same time something that keeps feeling true and seeing what really matters in a relationship. Would love to see some more of your writing! Great job for a first one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"But if I had to walk then heck I would walk", is my favourite line in the poem. You cleverly turned it into a piece of art. This is great for you first poem here

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You could maybe keep writing on this piece?? It's really good just seems there's not a full story here yet. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 27, 2013
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Hey you guys.. I'm Rose lee I am 15 years old and writing is my passion. When I was younger you would always find me somewhere hidden trying to write or read. Words are more my friends then some peopl.. more..

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