Ominous Crown of Gold

Ominous Crown of Gold

A Poem by Andrea R.
"

The glisten of the crown blinds my heart

"

Do not allow the queen of crowns to win

In pallid summers the sun cries black tears

The searching eyes could not help but have seen

Delirious, broken pools of dark smears

 

Return! Return! The queen wants a gold crown

Run! Run! Do not stop until light you find

Come Come! For the queen's power is going down

Stop Stop! Fright is building upon its shine

 

Smiling slowly and letting her win all

I cannot see much beyond streaks of fear

Hiding eternally from the gold fall

The ominous crown of gold caused a tear

 

Turning and walking to let the queen be

Torture and deep wounds reflect the old me

 

 

© 2012 Andrea R.


Author's Note

Andrea R.
My first sonnet here in WritersCafe.org
It's a bit special and I've included a variety of emotions in it.

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Wow, this is a beautiful sonnet! I am not a big fan of sonnets BTW, but I didn't know they could get this good, either!
Like I said, very good sonnet and it seems you have a great talent to show the entire community here!
Keep up the great work and keep on writing such beautiful and thoughtful sonnets :D

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Andrea R.

8 Years Ago

Thanks! :D



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Very well written! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea R.

8 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch :3
Well penned . Thank you for sharing .

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Andrea R.

8 Years Ago

Thank you for liking this!
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome...
Wow, this is a beautiful sonnet! I am not a big fan of sonnets BTW, but I didn't know they could get this good, either!
Like I said, very good sonnet and it seems you have a great talent to show the entire community here!
Keep up the great work and keep on writing such beautiful and thoughtful sonnets :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea R.

8 Years Ago

Thanks! :D

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Added on September 30, 2012
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Tags: Admiration, Fear

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Heartbroken tales of love and hope is what I like to write mostly about. more..

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A Poem by Andrea R.