I had another vision for what its Worth

I had another vision for what its Worth

A Story by Becca chew
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This is a little chapter I created to get my ducks in a row

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Another vision
The healer again.
The town is familiar this time
The buildings are exact to his own town
The people are familiar
He notices a few in the crowd.
The farmer, the town doctor, Bijouxs' family

Haziel focuses hard at what's going on in his vision this time. Paying attention to every detail
*(he has mystical visions somewhat distorted and invalid but others times spot on exact. )


The magical healer places his cold pale hand across the young women's forhead.
He bows his head.
Closes his eyes
His lips are moving slowly
But his voice is inaudible.
There's a dark aura around this healer.
Could he be casting a spell on her?
The women's heart glows and a small pea size ball floats out and enters the magical healer.

He removes his hand
And announces loudly overly zealous
The magical healer: I have absorbed her pain and negativity that rested in her heart! She is now cured!
The joy this healing brings me!
I shall heal you all
From all things negative.
For I am the most powerful healer of all the land.


The crowd cheers and cries out in joy.
Hope fills everyone's heart.
The dying family members
The sick children
Everyone.

Something's not right about this though
What did he mumble when his hand was her forehead and why was the negative aura so intense at that moment.
He has to stop everyone from going the this magical healer.


Haziel opens his eye he takes a deep breath.
He has to warn his town of the doom that lies ahead.
He gets up quickly
But something stops him….

Last time he tried to warn his town of something dangerous he ended up misreading his vision and his town and doctor stated his was ill/ crazy and just made things up for attention. Even bijoux and she usually tried to at least understand what his visions meant but ever since then she's been very distant and closed minded.


But oh well
F**k this town
Let them die
all of them.
Their dumb enough to fall for "the magical healer". That's their fault.

Not his so why should he have to save them we're all responsible for ourselves.





© 2017 Becca chew


Author's Note

Becca chew
So Haziel is full of Acid which is highly toxic to others but useful to him because like acid the molecule it gives him insight to the future.... He just hasn't gained full control of his visions yet and his town doesn't let him forget

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Added on May 1, 2017
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Becca chew
Becca chew

San antonio, TX



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Hello! I'm Becca chew I'm 24 I love making stories. And drawing I'm currently creating a manga. All from scratch. I basically want to post my daily writings that corresponds with my art I p.. more..

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