Veiled Secrets

 

Veiled Secrets   Secrets lament; Their chatter wastes away her time. Secrets lament To dig within a mind left bent Where once again regret will chime. Inside remorse's murky slime, Secrets lament. By Sharon Miller Bolander   © 2008 Peggy Paris (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Helena]

Now that is a Rondelet!! Well written, powerful in imagery and content.

Much enjoyed!

Helena

[Nassira]

WOW Sharon! What a great piece! And the picture that goes with it is rightly chosen. You did a great job in this not so easy challenge!
Salam to you :)

[angelina neves]

wondefuly done!

[Katie]

i love the presnentation of this poem and the simplicity of it

[Legion]

Wonderfully done. And so true. Like the angst I feel while reading this. Love the pic you put with it as well. Kudos.