660 Seconds

End of the night.

It came out drunk, spit it out, tell me what you want

examine my skins and take them all apart

in a parking lot

he loves me or he loves me not isn't the question

here

my frail wrists my chains to your tight hand

anchored round my neck.

But I tell you...oh that night I could count

I never lost track

5...10...15 minutes

all 660 seconds;

I thought of another

who thinks I'm a human

who thinks I wouldn't do this...

But the nice man biting my chest

knows better than to let me flee

"she likes guys with strong arms doesn't she?"

Oh romance...

me

a romantic dismantling

is what he says

romantic debauchery

take it all in

under the city moonlight

Reviews

[Gee]

Nowt wrong in f*****g a stranger as long as you don't feel bad about it aftrewards. Had many a one night stand, never to get over a lost love, they were mainly drink related, fun at the time, but with no long term gain...often left with an empty feeling afterwards.
Good morning.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Intense scene here which hints at unpleasant events. An abusive relationship perhaps.
Well writ.

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

Hmm, not another six? Fantasy or reality? Many would love to know, including I...

[Peggy Olson]

Reality...a casual observation of a very painful moment.

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

I am very sorry, but I'm sure words do not mend. A poet's gift is speaking from their soul...you have that. It's amazing, stunning in fact. Don't give up ever, and keep write. Would die just to see more...

[Peggy Olson]

I'll try my best to keep at it. Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

My kind words are free, and I wish I could do more for you. Tc.

[Peggy Olson]

Being encouraged to write always fills me with joy so thank you for that. It's more than enough.

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

I can tell you'd be a real winner in life. Such woman with wisdom and talent are a true gift to the earth. It's funny how I've stuck to my books yet it seems you are the one who is meant to carry the torch. I am very pleased to see one such as you. In ancient times, women like you would be a queen, easily. Trust me on this. This charm of mine is not in vain, as I feel it is a crime to not cherish a woman such as you. You have my strength.

[Peggy Olson]

A queen huh? Haha I'd prefer to be a witch living off in a cave somewhere. But thank you, I'm no good at handling compliments but your words really do mean a lot. More than you might think.

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

Witch is good but not as fun as you think. Anyways, it does keep life interesting. I am of course a witch, and an obvious one at that. You should so add me or hmu on Kik or something. You'd be an interesting person to chat with. I would know, right? You definitely have that inner goddess going on. I really do enjoy when it comes out in a woman...