Love Symptoms

Just a short poems of love, that unveils the power of true and sincere love.

Once upon a time,
A time i did not see my love for a second,
My heart began to shrink,
My lungs began to sink gasping for air as if drowning in an ocean,
An ocean of despair,
Just like the eclipse, my whole world was dark,
I wonder, what is the meaning of this? i ponder,
The birds in the sky, tress, grasses tells me,
It is when she is the reason for your existence,
the sun, moons shines more light to it, by saying,
"That is the meaning of love, when you love and being loved back more"

Reviews

[boygene borice]

beautiful writing. keep up :)

[Peleson]

Thanks for reading, will keep trying.

[Rassoul]

I really liked this one, nice work!

[Peleson]

Thank you so much.