Voyeur

Will you meet me tonight,

late, at your window?

I need to see you

like a stargazer

sees the skies.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Made me chuckle exactly which one are you?

[Relic's Bare Trees]

lol the one looking up.

[Onlyme]

Oh my lol naughty naughty.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

lol yes and it can be fun to. Only I don't actually do that. I saw it on the news. :)

[Onlyme]

oh yes Tim , I believe you not. wink

[Relic's Bare Trees]

wink wink back.

[Gee]

Which one is or are both one....like this

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thank you .

[Susan 🦋]

Dreamers look to the heavens...lovers find heaven in a soul mates gaze.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Well said. Thank you.

[Tom]

A clandestine affair, it's the suspense and secrecy that makes so exciting!

Yes, what time?

[Relic's Bare Trees]

ha, thanks Tom.

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

I love this simple yet profound

I interpret this peice as the woman in the picture who has a secret partner that nobody in the outside world knows about. A secret hidden not because of infidelity but because of the passion that they share with one another. She waits to see him in the night to look upon him with love and know that together they have a special bond that nobody can break.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Wonderful and romantic review. Thank you.

[V]

Reading this my mind comes up with two interpretations, either a stranger reflecting his voyeuristic nightly pleasures in a way that makes him believe he is building up a connection to his victim or a love existing of random dates at night, something like a rather inconsistent love. Anyways, I like the softness and dreaminess about it and the image of night, the night is always awesome poetical content as it's highly inspirational (to me)

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thank you for the review. Sometimes I write something with one thing in mind (your second interpretation) and someone mentions a different perspective I never thought about.

So basically, you're right on both interpretations.

As for the night I also like it for inspiration and have in fact written many poems involving it whether expressed in words or contemplated while writing.

[V]

I can relate to your way of thinking and adding the night to my poetic ramblings. I love its presence.

[Donald Wilson]

I see a star writing here

[Relic's Bare Trees]

I appreciate that, thanks.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it reads like moonlight...beautiful brevity!

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thanks Kelly.

[Ardra]

So simple yet so adorable and sweet..... how just a glimpse of the one you love can keep you satisfied...

loved the below lines

I need to see you,
like a stargazer
sees the skies.

i can relate it , the one who cannot be reached or you cant have you still like to see them.... their existence means so much to you.. thanks for sharing the beautiful creation..

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thanks for a great interpretation.

[Woody]

sweet piece. the poet is content to just watch from afar just like a stargazer. good comparison.

nice one, Rain.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thank you Woody.