The wildflowers and you.

The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days

you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

Reviews

[Tom]

When love is strong and unconditional, it feels like standing at the very summit of the highest mountain and all the world is envious!

Beautifully crafted sentiment, idyllic in words and imagery!

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Thanks very much.

[Ghania]

"Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening."
Very nicely penned.
You're so poetic. The words make beautiful images on one's mind. :))

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Thank you for the review.

[Ghania]

You're welcome. :)

[Sourav]

Very nice, very poetic... awesome!

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Thank you Sourav.

[Zoya]

Beautiful. A solid and power packed end. Much said in a few words. Loved it!

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Thanks Zoe.

[Zoya]

No problem

[Enchanted-Raven]

I love this ....... ...:) x

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Thank you Raven.

[Ardra]

Very beautiful poem....and a nice pic to compliment the same...

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Thank you Ria.

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Agree with Hebe very romantic and the picture emulates the image that you are trying to portray with these words

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Thank you TJ.

[Hebe]

So romantic .... so much needed in this cyber world. picture is perfect!

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Thank you.

[Shay Lyn]

This is a beautiful poem. It gives me the idea that nature hangs off of everything this girl does.

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Thank you.

[Chris]

Kelly meant her comment and I would also say no less... words with that intent would melt rock... who could stand a chance listening...

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Your review is appreciated. (and late)