Sea of Beasts

A beast called alcohol.

F**k, no, my glass is almost empty,

Be a friend and pass the bottle of that Walker whiskey,

My hands are grabbing girls who act all mischievous and frisky,

But my legs are picking up the fact that I’m kinda tipsy.

The conversations lose their meaning to a certain degree,

The drinks are sliding down my throat as if they were ice tea,

My vision’s getting blurry, shattered images and debris,

Yet my mind keeps flashing pictures of what I can’t unsee.

Now I’m pouring like a beast that is on a killing spree,

I didn’t drink some alcohol, I drank the f*****g largest sea,

To transform into something else and forget the misery,

Which attacks me every day and f***s up conscience viciously.

Author's Note

This is one of the tasks for the "30 Day Creative Writing Challenge" I'm doing. I didn't upload any of the other challenges, but I thought maybe someone would read this one. This is day 06: Write a poem (12 rhyming lines) about getting incerasingly drunk.

Reviews

[SmileOfARebel]

"Yet my mind keeps flashing pictures of what I can’t unsee. Now I’m pouring like a beast that is on a killing spree. I didn’t drink some alcohol, I drank the f*****g largest sea". Those lines are great. Love the references you gave about someone who is suppose to be tipsy and acting out because of it.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thank you very much for the review. :)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Dude, I LOVED this cuz it was amazing. It's like one of those poems written in a lighter tone but with a deeper and serious meaning.
N what challenge r u talking about?:-D:-D:-).

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thank you, that's what I was aiming for! :D
I don't know, my friend found this photo where it says what you have to write each day, and she asked me if I wanted to start doing it, since she too wanted to give it a try. :)

[Invisible]

is it weird I thought this was called a sea of breasts at first before double checking the spelling? XD

sounds like an interesting dream man, you should write that one down. oh wait...you already did!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thank you for the review! XD
But I have to admit, you kinda lost me there, what "dream" are you talking about? XD

[Invisible]

i was just being weird again, forgive me XD

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Hahaha, it's cool XD

[Invisible]

cool is cool, and so are we. only cool people don't brag about how cool they are, except us in this one instance cause we never say we're cool, so just this once is ok, especially if we don't go gabbin' about it to other people lol

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Oh my God...sometimes I say I'm cool! Then that means I'm actually not cool! :O lol

[Invisible]

ha, don't worry too much about it though, in extreme cases my theory is flipped backwards and people are cool even if they say they are, and the other way around. it's like how sometimes someone who says they don't like someone cause they're a certain way and that person is in fact that way and the speaker isn't just being biased, you know...

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Now I'm kinda confused. XD

[Invisible]

so am I actually, how sad is that? XD

[Tomislav Petricevic]

It's good to be confused, at least you spend some time not thinking about depressing stuff you usually think about, right? xD
And I just read "Sea of breasts" when I clicked on this poem, so I guess it happens to other people too. XD

[Invisible]

funny lol.