Essence

Essence

A Poem by Tomislav Petricevic
"

Though I'd give it a shot with a haiku. WARNING! I suck.

"

Life and death,

an unbreakable connection,

the essence of world.

© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic


Author's Note

Tomislav Petricevic
This just popped into my mind while studying, so i said: "I'mma write it down."

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That's actually a lot more profound than it seems on the surface. The "essence of world"--that one line cannot be overlooked. It's a lot deeper and requires more than a cursory glance. I don't know anything about the haiku formula for poems, but even so, this is still really good. An unbreakable connection--that sums up life and death very well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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True that.
Simple, elegant, powerful.


Posted 8 Years Ago


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So much meanings lie behind those three lines =)
very nice work !

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kratak poem, ali prekrasan! Svaka čast (;

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree. This is very profound. It's funny how so few words can mean so much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Wonderful, just what I would have hoped it would convey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good and short keep up the good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very good, simple and with great meaning and truth. Great haiku :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


That's actually a lot more profound than it seems on the surface. The "essence of world"--that one line cannot be overlooked. It's a lot deeper and requires more than a cursory glance. I don't know anything about the haiku formula for poems, but even so, this is still really good. An unbreakable connection--that sums up life and death very well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and simple like a haiku is but still very deep. Really liked it.

P.S. you do not suck :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


quick and interesting :) i like it a lot!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tomislav Petricevic
Tomislav Petricevic

Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia



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