Purpose

I question myself about this sometimes.

The light, it will always glow

The wind, it will always blow

The water, it will always flow 

The time, it will always go

My thoughts, they will always grow 

The sad, they will always woe

The smart, they will always know 

The plants, they will always grow 

Everything has a purpose, 

But do I? 

I don't know

Everyone seems to say so

As my thoughts of doubt cease to grow 

I say to myself, "yes, now I know"  

Thanks to you, I now know 

I have a purpose...

It is to love you

Author's Note

What do you think of the rhyming? I liked it okay. (I'm only 12.) Please review :)

Reviews

[Bob Davies]

It has a nice flow,
but I don't quite know,
how to let you know,
that rhyming isn't all it's cracked upto be :)
Think balance, not rhymes :)

[HereWithoutYou<3]

Your rhyming is very very good, and good job.

[Boantlers]

I liked your rhyming. This is a very good write.
Well done

[ForTheWorld]

..i like it..nice rhyme...

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Nice work Love it. Keep it up God bless lily

[Ian Faraway]

Funny, the previous 3 comments state that you're rhyming was very good. I was have to disagree. The first half of the poem had nice rhymes and I enjoyed it, then you sort of faded off in some other direction with it. THEN YOU GO BACK!? Oh come on, man, you're killing me here. I loved the poem but the rhyming totally messed with me here. Yeah the rhyming was good, then it was horrible then it rested on a total nightmare... this is harsh, yes, but it's because you didn't rhyme then you went back to it. Other than that I love the poem's meaning.

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it's called monorhyme and you did a pretty good job, the problem will this type of poem is that you force the rhyme, just to make it fit..but you seems to have produced a solid poem. well penned

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the rhyming sequence is done very well~ the subject matter poignantly displayed~ it may take longer for some but eventually we all come to our purpose~ =)~ well done~

[Tony]

I like it.
It is rhythmic, entertaining and purposeful.
A great blend overall, with a perfect ending.
I spent 25 years defining purpose and some kid spells it out in a few lines.
Life is a strange and wondrous thing.....