Midnight Harbor

Midnight Harbor

A Poem by Elisa
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Inspired by a trip to The Pike

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A towering wheel of shimmering lights
Past a cobblestone string of loud music halls
Surrounded by waves crowned in white froth
And a sparkling expanse of ebony waters

Beside them, a jungle
of blackened green brush
as they walk down a pathway 
made silver by moonlight. 

Standing before them, a tower ever-changing
Sifting through shades of its heart - burning bright.

Here they sit, on the rocks admidst the sand
as the swirling salty air
coats her dark curls. 

Here they sit, till the sun greets the bay
hoping tomorrow will leave them in peace. 

© 2015 Elisa


Author's Note

Elisa
I wanted to try a more atmospheric poem this time around, just to see what I could do with the imagery and stuff. I hope you all enjoyed it, and thank you so much for stopping by! Have a wonderful day!
<3 Elisa

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Hey, I really enjoyed this style of writing and I like how you stuck to the theme of the poem from the beginning towards the end, this poem was very descriptive and had an atmospheric feel to it. These were beautifully written lines " Here they sit, on the rocks admidst the sand
as the swirling salty air
coats her dark curls."


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thanks you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Elisa

9 Years Ago

*thank you!


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I bet I now have a clear view of a habor indeed!that's simply how great writers should be,bringing out images through words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
And... I say, you've made a very beautiful atmospheric poetry with the castles of your bountiful heart. Ah - A vivid imagery you've come up with. For a while, I thought that.. Oh, I was hanging out over there with a beautiful 'Elisa'.. and we both walking the woodland... having a great pie of conversations... with time. Nice imagery. Elisa, you should post some kinda more stuffs related to your breathtaking journey's where your leave you foggy imprints behind over the dune of love (land). Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! And you won't have to wait very long, I'm publishing another love poem in a few h.. read more
Its a great write dear.
I enjoy reading it. Well expressed write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Awww thanks!
Saddam

9 Years Ago

Anytime dear..........
Great imagery and a fantastic write! Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Jamie

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :) Feel free to review my stuff :)
Hey, I really enjoyed this style of writing and I like how you stuck to the theme of the poem from the beginning towards the end, this poem was very descriptive and had an atmospheric feel to it. These were beautifully written lines " Here they sit, on the rocks admidst the sand
as the swirling salty air
coats her dark curls."


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thanks you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Elisa

9 Years Ago

*thank you!
A powerful poem, expressed so uniquely. It grabs the reader and opens the signification within. Write on poetess.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Aww thanks girl! Haha write on!
I could see it all and it is lovely!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Julie!
very much atmosphere
poem hold serenity that lure in Amjad

much grace and metric as writer Elisa



Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Aww thank you! That's so nice!

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Added on February 15, 2015
Last Updated on February 23, 2015
Tags: nature, night, beauty, pier, ocean

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Elisa

Los Angeles, CA



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