Snowy Tundra

Snowy Tundra

A Poem by Ellusive Rose
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It describes itself.

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 Snowy Tundra 

 
Aching pains from my head to my knees 
Not knowing whether it will  go away and come again as it please 
Heart shattering like a porcelain vase dropping on hard marble floors 
Just like the scar it leaves engraved on its  white beauty 
Is what the pain of the world does on my slowly beating heart 
Tears falling like massive rain drops that slowly turn into the hail of the damned
Snowy tundra freezing over my last glimmer of hope for this world 
Hope that was once a sunlight morning, rainbows showing  from the rain of yesterday’s turmoil
Will spring ever come again to the white blanket plateaus of the night 
Or will darkness live on for ever in eternal winter?
 
What was five became four, then three, then two 
One remains as Thor’s mighty hammer beats down on my exposed darkened back 
Satan laughing from the scene of my aching misery 
Just once will the winter come to the fires of the burning  hell?
 
My dark past shrouded in more mystery than any murder 
I may still live but I have died on the inside 
Black my white and white my black never mixed to gray 
A mirror showing my beastly reflection from my heart
Black shadows creep upon my eyes blinding my only true sense
Seeing is believing and hearing is just a benefit 
Only these eyes can see the truth to this world  with out any verbal lies 
One last look on the weather forecast for tomorrow 
Tomorrow….more like my future….
Snow will continue to fall and spring will never come again.
 

 

© 2009 Ellusive Rose


Author's Note

Ellusive Rose
I just came up with it.

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Aw, such beautiful imagrey wrapped within the lines and then the color coding just adds more to depth to the deep, fullfilled emotions.

I could feel the hopelessness as I read and understand the comparison between the everlasting snow to tears, pain, and misery. A common, but uniquely described comparison, I say. Anyways, I really liked it.

Very descriptive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


good job :) this is very well written.
beautifully executed :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2009

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Ellusive Rose
Ellusive Rose

Valley Stream, NY



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Hi, i am a 16 year old girl who loves to write and draw more than anything. Im just starting out with writng stories, so please don't be hard on me okay? That doesn't mean leave out important deta.. more..

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